A Mysterious Note [WIP, GXB] [Demo!]

[Snow Blossom]

@ manga_otaku
Lol I was like "wut?" when I read your post at first XD
Btw I'm asian but I like asian guys... which kinda sucks since they're practically nonexistent in my school >3<
And assuming you mean Snow Blossom, I am chinese, how'd you know? X3

[YuukiCrossPudding]

@death_hug alright! *A* and lol yeah pudding is delicious, also vamp knight is awesome <3<3
xD I'm glad if I can help somehow~~

@manga_otaku LOL that's why when I read the post.. I was like... why this comment for snow blossom answer my question?? xDD

@Snow Blossom woah I don't know there's many chinese in this forum, emichii is chinese too lolol
yeah =A= at my school there's many chinese, but.. .__. no one is really my type orz
and there's many weirdos hiks...

[manga_otaku]

@ Snow Blossom - yeah xD I think I read it in the guestbook xD

@ YuukiCrossPudding - sorry about that LOL

[Death_HUG]

...bump...DX

I decided to post the progress of the game so far...

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Statistics:

The game contains 564 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 5,827 words,
for an average of 10.3 words per screen.
The game contains 2 menus.

I think if I work really hard on this game for the next few weeks, I'll be able to get a demo out before my school starts! Yay! Wish me luck...DX

[backansi]

Good luck with your project *_* I'll look forward to it.

[Death_HUG]

@backansi
Thank you! Hopefully I won't disappoint you orz

[eternal eclipsea]

Nyah. The demo is going to be very popular~

Oh and I want Sujin's phone... O.O

[Death_HUG]

Thanks!
But if you get Sujin's phone, then my life will be screwed XD *thinks of all the things Nicole could possibly do with that phone* ...hmm but there could be some benifits kkkkkkk >.>

[eternal eclipsea]

D=
That's true... But but!! I definately want a DNA tracking device.... In phone form!
And your welcome~

[Death_HUG]

That's...creepy XD Why would you want a DNA tracking device....in phone form?

Oh and the demo is finally up! Yay! ^-^

[OTM]

Just finished the demo. It was interesting and I really like the story so far, especially the note she received in the end of the demo.

Um- quck question though.

Is it me, or does Mr. Park have the same name as the 'mysterious guy' in the beginning who has her mother and father? Is this intentional? You know, they're both named Kibum.

As for the questions
1. Right now, my favorite character is between Hiroki. Hiroki- because he's anti social and seems to be a good challenge. I seem to always go for the anti social types first >_>;
2. As for fixing, I don't really see anything that needs fixing.
3. The only thing I didn't like much about the demo- was where you had to put your blood type. Heck, I don't know what my blood type is. Does the blood type you put down affect how the characters respond to you or your chances of obtaining them? I like the demo though, good luck in making the game :>

[Death_HUG]

Um- quck question though.

Is it me, or does Mr. Park have the same name as the 'mysterious guy' in the beginning who has her mother and father? Is this intentional? You know, they're both named Kibum.

Yep, it's intentional ^-^

As for the questions
1. Right now, my favorite character is between Hiroki. Hiroki- because he's anti social and seems to be a good challenge. I seem to always go for the anti social types first >_>;

I'm glad you like Hiroki XD I'll make sure that he'll be a good challenge ^-^

3. The only thing I didn't like much about the demo- was where you had to put your blood type. Heck, I don't know what my blood type is. Does the blood type you put down affect how the characters respond to you or your chances of obtaining them? I like the demo though, good luck in making the game :>

The bloodtype effects how many points you get when you pick the right choice correctly. So it could be easier/harder to get a certain character. So, yeah, this would probably affect how some characters respond to you. And thank you ^-^

[Snow Blossom]

Yaay the demo!! It was quite cute overall, but I when I hit Preferences in the Main Menu, it suddenly "encountered a terminal error" and self-destructed. D:
Btw, I absolutely adore the piece of paper Sujin handed Bora. The chibis are so cute ^o^
Also, it might be a good idea to make a sprite for the mystery mastermind - something like an outline that's filled in with black, maybe?

[CutieHoney]

wow i love your game.
1. My favorite character is Oh Seunghyun
2. I don't think you need to fix anything
3. The demo is great, it has a good cliffhanger
Can you let me know when you expect the game to be completed, i'm so looking toward to it

[Poketto Kunoichi]

1. Who's your favorite character and why? Eunmi and Kibum. I usually don't like violent girls, but I understand why she does what she does. XD I like Kibum because of his obsession with sushi. I laughed about the just tell him there's sushi in the kitchen line.

2. Is there anything I should fix? The textbox. I don't know how to describe it, but it seems...off. Also, only if you're able to, draw unique backgrounds or find someone to do for you. This can be forgiven though since I imagine it'd be pretty pricey, but maybe just a few?

3. Your opinion of the demo? I enjoyed it! The characters really made the story for me. In my opinion, they're the most important aspect in any visual novel. I critique I have about the plot though is how...calm Bora seems about the whole situation. I would think she'd be as downright scared and worried and having the thought of what's happening to her parents occupying her mind.

So concluding my incredibly short post, I enjoyed it! Will play its full release.