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from Crossed`Ark.
VN will launch soon.

note : coloring style can be changed with more smooth color(not greasy one). i'm just trying to copying huke style but still fail. i'm big fans~~~!!!!!

for character:
Shima Konozawa/Shima
trait : highschool student with bright smile and personality. Kukumi
trait : kuudere. rarely talk and kinda expressionless. highschool student. *my waifu, don't dare to touch my precious little girl! Sheva
trait : kinda tsundere *even my self not sure. have an adult mind. highschool student. Kim Xiao Lee/Xi
trait : tsundere. she's have a nice smile and bright aura. highschool student. Tengku Desi Nugraha Sofia/Sofi
trait : loli? arr dunno. i'm not sure. but she's should kinda loli, but seems like i can't fit that trait to her. an arkeolog. how old her? ask her LOL! Kim Yang Tze/Mr.Kim
trait : scientist. El psy Congroo~ oh wait, no no. LOL he's not a scientist, he's an arkeolog. need moar expresiion? wait for Crossed`Ark launch.

and here for background.

@fenol

Wow, your artwork is beautiful.
The backgrounds are not as detailed, but people usually don't pay attention to them as much.

thanks ScottySeng~

well yeah but surely i need to work out my skill on background too~

I agree about the backgrounds - the lack of detail is not that obvious in the first pictures, but the last three definitely would need more of that. It seems kind of cold that way.
The characters are great. Females have the "anime-sweetness", males have much character (the doctor looks a little bit derpy though, I think the pupils don't match? Seems cross-eyed), but it also looks a little bit more serious than the average anime arts. I really like that about them.

Wow such a nice style to create!~

Shima and Kim Xiao Lee seem quite interesting to me.

Funny Tengku Desi Nugraha "Sofia" she has my name

Nice!

I agree with Crusher, scientist guy needs his irises moved a bit closer together (maybe move the one to our left more to the right?) but all in all I like the style. The poses and expressions give a sense of the character's personalities, which is nice.

The small woman doesn't give off a loli vibe at all besides in her stature, looks like a serious and determined career lady to me. By arkeolog do you mean 'archaeologist'?

thanks all~

ah about background, seems like all realize it LOL
one, because i'm lazy. lol doing building/home like coloring kinda hard for me. but somehow i managed it on Lift.
well background need more detail, i'll try too not to get bored on it. lol

NatsukiDeath wrote:Funny Tengku Desi Nugraha "Sofia" she has my name

LOL that's my best friend name too actually. this character are an indonesian girl. i hope you willing to play this vn after i launch it and greet my Sofi

Omnificent wrote:By arkeolog do you mean 'archaeologist'?

ups! yeah that's it! lol i'm too fond on my language and forget to translate it.

Crusher wrote:The characters are great. Females have the "anime-sweetness", males have much character (the doctor looks a little bit derpy though, I think the pupils don't match? Seems cross-eyed), but it also looks a little bit more serious than the average anime arts. I really like that about them.

actually this is the first time i draw an old man so i kinda don't know the right posture, specially about related job. at first this old man even become a young guy. i'll try to learn about it more, thanks for the advice and liking my style!
i hope i can fond with this style, well because i'm not into moe =w=

Sheva
trait : kinda tsundere *even my self not sure. have an adult mind. highschool student.

Yeah, it's hard to look at her bust size and not have something adult in mind. How big is that, anyway? G-cup? I mean, these things are the size of her head! No wonder she's a tsundere; she probably gets a lot of unwanted attention.

Taleweaver wrote:How big is that, anyway? G-cup? I mean, these things are the size of her head! No wonder she's a tsundere; she probably gets a lot of unwanted attention.

wanna know her three size? LOL

Character designs = Beautiful
Coloring = Gorgeous!
Backgrounds = Some are pretty good, some seem OK-ish.

For the most part, the art looks FANTASTIC!

Wow...just amazing,,,

I really love the coloring job on these!

thanks everyone~~ thanks~~~

anyway if anyone need colouring or chara design on their VN, i'm willing to do it. commission or not
lol promotion okay right? lol

I don't suppose you're willing to draw people's existing characters, though I would give my right arm to see your version of Jeff. <_<

Omnificent wrote:I don't suppose you're willing to draw people's existing characters, though I would give my right arm to see your version of Jeff. <_<

sorry it's very late. kinda busy and after it lazy. lolz
here~ what do u think?
sorry still sketch ver. ufufuf again, lazy.