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Need help with English. CLOSED!

#1 Post by clua » Thu Feb 09, 2012 9:32 pm

Already found someone! Thank you so much to all for cooperate!

Hello! Im working on a VN named The hurtfull wall..It consist on 6 chapters which I only have 4 already written
My main problem is that I know english, but not well enough to pull some narration and dialogues

Im requesting someone who knows english well, check out my script and correct it
In return, since I belive no one should work for free, I can only offer sprite art in
return(maybe 3 characters with 4 expresions? D: )

Im leaving some of my awfull text here so you can get an idea of what to expect:

Today Rebecca talked to me
She said she wanted me to visit a therapist
She thinks someone did something to me the day that I went to Elsa s house
Even If I want to say thats wrong...I cant bring any words about it
Because Im not really sure
So I thought It was better to go
Maybe he can hyptotize me or something


If someone agrees I will send my script of the first 4 chapters....When I finish chapter 5 and 6, I will send them!
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Re: Need help with English..Seeking for spanish/english spea

#2 Post by Nightydreams » Thu Feb 09, 2012 10:57 pm

Hmmm, I'm note sure on your requirements, Do you need

A person who can speak and write both SPANISH AND ENGLISH.

Or do you need a person who can speak and write EITHER SPANISH OR ENGLISH?

Does your writer need to be fluent in both languages or only one?
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Re: Need help with English..Seeking for spanish/english spea

#3 Post by clua » Fri Feb 10, 2012 12:49 pm

Nightydreams wrote:Hmmm, I'm note sure on your requirements, Do you need

A person who can speak and write both SPANISH AND ENGLISH.

Or do you need a person who can speak and write EITHER SPANISH OR ENGLISH?

Does your writer need to be fluent in both languages or only one?
Sorry I think I requested this wrong
I need a person who MAINLY knows english, because my native language is spanish and I have a lot of gramatical errors on my
script

I gave this a thought yesterday, and I realized Its not that necessary to need a person who also speaks spanish(I requested that because I can express myself better on that way and let others know what I think exactly)

I just need someone who check my texts and correct them(changing my title)
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Re: Need help with English.

#4 Post by Greeny » Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:36 pm

I'm actually looking for an artist to commission for my project.
While my needs don't exactly correspond to 3 sprites/4expressions, as I mostly need characters drawn into backgrounds like a CG (I've got the backgrounds) but maybe we can work out a deal? Perhaps a minor discount? What I need might be a bit much though.
Get back to me if you're interested in working something out.

In any case, I'm pretty sure I could keep up my end of the bargain.
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#5 Post by Nightydreams » Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:40 pm

Well, greeny has already voluntered but I would also like to volunteer for proofreading and, if need be, co-writing. English is my second language aswell but since I spoke it since a young age I am as fluent as any native speaker, also, I could attempt to learn spanish ^.^.

and don't worry about making art for me, I'm still on scripting for my project, art won't come up for ages!
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#6 Post by misamane » Tue Feb 14, 2012 12:33 am

I could help you! I'm currently working on a project at the moment actually and could definitely use sprites... at some point anyway ^_^
I saw your art on another thread and I love it :3
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Re: Need help with English.

#7 Post by clua » Thu Feb 16, 2012 8:10 pm

sorry guys for the late reply..I was writting my reply but I had a very nasty flu that kept me away from the pc...
I would like to tell everyone that I have already a person who will help me with this(Mink)Thank you so much to all for wanting to help me! ;_; And sorry for taking so long to reply!
Greeny wrote:I'm actually looking for an artist to commission for my project.
While my needs don't exactly correspond to 3 sprites/4expressions, as I mostly need characters drawn into backgrounds like a CG (I've got the backgrounds) but maybe we can work out a deal? Perhaps a minor discount? What I need might be a bit much though.
Get back to me if you're interested in working something out.

In any case, I'm pretty sure I could keep up my end of the bargain.
Hello! Thank you for offering your help...But I find another person who will do it!...Btw I checked your thread about requesting someone to draw..If you want I can do the job! I can make you an small discount for wanting to help!
Nightydreams wrote:Well, greeny has already voluntered but I would also like to volunteer for proofreading and, if need be, co-writing. English is my second language aswell but since I spoke it since a young age I am as fluent as any native speaker, also, I could attempt to learn spanish ^.^.

and don't worry about making art for me, I'm still on scripting for my project, art won't come up for ages!
D:! You are so kind! But I dont want to abuse! I belive its a kind of hard work so It should be compensated in some way D:!
misamane wrote:I could help you! I'm currently working on a project at the moment actually and could definitely use sprites... at some point anyway ^_^
I saw your art on another thread and I love it :3
XD Thank you so much for the compliment :_;...Im so sorry for updating this so late...I have already a person who will do the checkout for me..sorry again! and thank you so much!!

I will close this thread..Thank you guys for offering your help..It means a lot for me..If you want I can draw something small for you all...Just ask ;D!(send me a note haha)
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