NACIRA [GXB][Otome,comedy,mystery] COMPLETED

[WickedRaccoon]

8D *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeal* you're back!i was starting to believe that this was getting abandoned,so i'm really happy it's still in progress!!!!

[ngareci]

I'm sorryyyyy, it's really hard for me to manage my time well.
Nacira is my promise to the world, and to some people that have been work hard for this, so it must be finished no matter what! >___<

[WickedRaccoon]

haha that's ok,i understand (i also have a humongous issue with time ^^;;;)
if you do need any extra help,i once again offer my services
the colors on the guys are better now (no more pink :'D ../shot). a question:are there eyes closed?cause i thought that they had no eye balls when i first saw them..
the cg sketches look really nice.the last one made me laugh! (who the heck is carrying nacira?)

[ngareci]

Thank you!!
I'll pm you later, I'm still editing the story after being coded before make it fix..
The one who carrying Nacira is Werkudara, All the rough sketches will be remake by my artist later..
And I thought a good game need an icon, so I make one.
Here's Nacira icon..

[tiya_nofurita]

Cool icon !
How did you make it ? (what program ?)

[ngareci]

Thank you! I'm using SAI and photoshop, with reference from ancient java necklace ornament..
And as I said before, I'm at full speed.
Here's the new main menu mock up..




I'm a little bit twisted with the crowd of the background, UI and logo, but I have no other idea where will I put them on the better composition...


And here's the options mock up..



I haven't talk about the changing of the options UI with my coder, but I guess I still have time to push this game to the maximum appearance..

[ngareci]

Here's the phase's bg, or something between days..
I'd like to mix the style, I think it's pretty cute, a little bit weird, though..

[WickedRaccoon]

Wow,now that's what I call full speed XD
Ok I'll be here whenever you wanna pm me.
Haha I'm trying to imagine the cause of the Werkudara x Nacira scene while typing...
Back to typing. The new logo is amazing,especially the jewel. It's so detailed,it almost looks like it's a photo,not a drawing. The options menu looks good,simple and cute. Everything is readable,so I don't think anybody will have a problem there,and the color choises are smoothly paired up together.
About the main menu,it looks fine to me. But if it seems a bit crowded to you,try experimenting with resizing the guy's a bit,to give more space. Again,this is a random idea that poped in my head,I'm no expert in these stuff :'D
The phase bg is actually really cute ^^ But I had a little trouble reading the "Day 1".Maybe try coloring it with a darker color?
Now that progress is speeding up,do you have an estimated date?

[ngareci]

Thank you for your comment and suggestion~
I really appreciate it.. XD
For the main menu, I'll edit it some more later, for phase screen, I've edited it and it's turn like this



I think it's a little bit better..
And for estimate date, hopefully I can release it on 30th January 2013, cuz it'll be one of the greatest birthday present for me..
And I will really work hard for it..

[WickedRaccoon]

Now the bg is perfect,not just a little bit better! Purple is a nice color choice,and resizing the decor gives it an elegant feel.
January?Cool,it'll be a New Years present!! Can't wait!

[try10]

Everything looks very professional. Great work! I can't wait to play the full game!

[ngareci]

Thank you!!

Here's klepon for people who wonder it's visual



And I guess this game needs another programmer just for costumizing the menu. I'm really not good for it, and the present programmer is busy with the script. Gonna write in the recruitment thread soon..

[ngareci]

Happy new year everyone!!

I got some updates for the artwork
here's the real klepon we'll use


and another food and background








I've took some picture of Palace for background on my year-end-family-trip in Yogyakarta's palace, hopefully it'll turn out great.
I'm still working on script, got a new idea for the story, and furnish the exist background, and make another one
My programmer gonna start to code the ending script
My artist is still working on CGs (this game will have around 15 CGs in total)
My Musician is still working on special music for each Pandawa. She's still searching for inspiration in certain rice-field, she said..
29 days to go!

[WickedRaccoon]

Happy New Years to you too!!
The CGs look yum--err,good,I mean good!!! ^^;; How many has your artist done in total?
Going to throw another idea for the main menu now. Instead of resizing the guys,what if you changed the box-like frames,and make a Pandawa styled frame? It saves up space,cause you only show the guy's faces and it gives you more options in re-arraging their possitions.
It's good to hear that progress is moving smoothly along. Good job! ;D
Also,I checked out the Yogyakarta's palace (cause it triggered my curiousity) and it's a cool place. Can't wait to see how it turns out.
(29 days,Y U No pass faster? T_T)

[ngareci]

Alright! Thank you for the advice!
I'm gonna give it a try~!
For CG, I just ask my artist and he still doesn't give to much progress.. :/
But I know I can count on him..

Today after did the finalize script for the second time, I remake some backgrounds.
Here's the update