AXIOM.01 [detective mystery][otome]

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Re: AXIOM.01 [detective mystery][otome]

#106 Post by Gospel »

Holy... wow... This project looks absolutely amazing!
I love murder mysteries/detective games, so, obviously, I'm really interested in this.
Too bad it's on hiatus... Hopefully, you'll be able to work on it again soon!
I love the main character's design so much (well, I love the character designs in general, but Christie is by far the best :lol: )

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For the demo (Arc 1):
  • Story - 100%
  • Script - 100%
  • Art - 80% (need to finish 2 CG backgrounds + 6 clue images)
  • GUI - 100%
  • Music- 100% (using placeholders for now)
So like... the demo was almost completed...?
Please tell me it's done and I just didn't see it anywhere... otherwise, seeing this kinda hurts :(
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Re: AXIOM.01 [detective mystery][otome]

#107 Post by Arowana »

@ Gospel
Aw thanks, I think your mystery game looks super interesting too! :D I have the hardest time designing outfits (Sagan still reminds me of a reject Yugioh character, sob), but I see a lot of pictures of Sherlock Holmes with plaid, so Christie is kind of based off that.

And yeah, everything to the end of the first case was done, except for 3 clue images I think. I'm really sorry I never released it, but I think it would just embarrass me now since it's so old (the files are still in ancient Renpy 6.13). :cry:
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Re: AXIOM.01 [detective mystery][otome]

#108 Post by AntiquedFae »

I am just posting to say that I completely did not get the Christie reference. O.o

AHHHHHHHH! -headsmack to infinity and beyond-

-ahem- Also, I would play the ancient case 1. Ancient is good! Like mummies.
In all seriousness though, I would love to see it. It could be a sort of teaser for the revised version, and something to hold us over until heavy work is done on the new version. Sort of like a demo. Then you could also get feedback on the writing and gameplay styles, so you know what to keep, improve on or change in the 'proper' version. :) I think it would be a really great test-run! Also, it feels fantastic to have something released and get feedback on it, even if it is something old. You can also put the ancient and dusty disclaimer on it.

This is partly me being selfish though, because I would really love to play it! ^^
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Re: AXIOM.01 [detective mystery][otome]

#109 Post by Gospel »

Arowana wrote:@ Gospel
Aw thanks, I think your mystery game looks super interesting too! :D I have the hardest time designing outfits (Sagan still reminds me of a reject Yugioh character, sob), but I see a lot of pictures of Sherlock Holmes with plaid, so Christie is kind of based off that.

And yeah, everything to the end of the first case was done, except for 3 clue images I think. I'm really sorry I never released it, but I think it would just embarrass me now since it's so old (the files are still in ancient Renpy 6.13). :cry:
Thanks!
But yeah, I always struggle with outfit designs myself, but yours look really great, so I hope, when you're going to revamp this project, you actually won't change (much about) them! Remy's outfit is something I'd even like to wear myself :lol:
Also, he kinda reminds me of Jude from Tales of Xillia, haha.
And well, that kinda sucks, but I can understand you. I'd probably feel very much the same.
Nevertheless, AntiquedFae's making some good points, so you should think about it!
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Re: AXIOM.01 [detective mystery][otome]

#110 Post by siyereeee »

I was wondering if this is still active? Image
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#111 Post by illuminate001 »

siyereeee wrote:I was wondering if this is still active? Image
Im guessing not as it's been YEARS since an update has been heard of. :( which is a shame because I really love the premise of this title. Plus its episodic in format! Woot~!
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