I have two dedicated proofreaders along with several beta testers, and stuff still slips by. Don't be too down on yourself. XDTaleweaver wrote:Aggh - those typos! Too many... why haven't I been more careful?
Bionic Heart 2
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Yes is normal / human I think, when you write 100k+ words. Unless you're a robot, mistakes can happen 
Ayu how do you do with the voices ? I always wondered that, if there are typos or wrong words you have to redo the voice lines again... ?
Ayu how do you do with the voices ? I always wondered that, if there are typos or wrong words you have to redo the voice lines again... ?
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Um, recording voiceovers helps me find typos sometimes. When a person actually has to read it out loud, it's easier to catch when a sentence doesn't make sense or I used the wrong word (or a word that doesn't exist). If the voice actor says something a little different, I usually change the text unless it's crucial that the text remain the same. But yeah, it's not uncommon to have to ask the voice actors to return to redo a line or two if things in the game get changed.
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I see thanks for the explanation 
Time for another image:

Tanya version 2.0 is polite, educated, saves kittens and puppies... but is real?
Time for another image:

Tanya version 2.0 is polite, educated, saves kittens and puppies... but is real?
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New screenshot. Don't underestimate that little boy Jason, he'll play an important role in the whole story. Here he is admiring Tanya's body who misunderstands his real motives of admiration
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Update: the wait is almost over. I finished coding the game scenes, except the endings (will do that in next days). Meanwhile sent a test version to Taleweaver since the plot is so complex and has so much replayability that we need to check it carefully (is easy to make mistakes when working on such games).
The game should be finished really soon, for sure the next month
The game should be finished really soon, for sure the next month
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