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Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

#646 Post by DeeKay »

Arelune wrote:
- Sorry if... I'm being blunt but... would you include yourself in this group ?
* looks embarrassed *
Me? Oh no, I don't fangirl about persons. Why~? Do you want me to? ;)
* face turns red *
- N... No ! Th.. That's not what I... ! I... I mean...
* takes a deep breath *
- I'm sorry, I don't know what's wrong with me today.
* avoids Arelune's gaze as he speaks *
- I guess I'm confused and I don't understand what I'm feeling right now.
* looks at the floor *
- I don't suppose you'd understand what I'm feeling ? I don't know anymore...
* closes his eyes and seems deep in thought *
- Heh, some teacher I am !
Arelune wrote:
- I'm sorry, I really shouldn't talk about this. I hope you understand.
Meh. :C
- ...
* looks concerned *
- That's not something I talk about with just anyone...
* closes his eyes for a second *
- Maybe I'll tell you about it someday, when I'm more comfortable around you. Is that okay ?
* smiles *
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As promised, a quick revision to my sprite :
Better. :) I notice you haven't shaded his shirt though.
I'm no expert in coloring and I have to admit I got lazy so... yeah ^^'''
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Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

#647 Post by Arelune »

- I don't suppose you'd understand what I'm feeling ? I don't know anymore...
E-eh? Huh? What you're feeling? Um, awkwardness by being verbally cornered by a student? What else? :?
- Maybe I'll tell you about it someday, when I'm more comfortable around you. Is that okay ?
I guess I'm not important. ...All right. :|
I'm no expert in coloring and I have to admit I got lazy so... yeah ^^'''
I am no hero at colouring either, but it kind of looks strange if half is shaded and half not. :P

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Arelune wrote:E-eh? Huh? What you're feeling? Um, awkwardness by being verbally cornered by a student? What else? :?
- Hmm... That makes sense I guess.
* nods *
Arelune wrote:
- Maybe I'll tell you about it someday, when I'm more comfortable around you. Is that okay ?
I guess I'm not important. ...All right. :|
* grabs Arelune's shoulders *
- No ! That's not what I meant !
* realizes what he's doing and releases his hold on her *
- I'm sorry ! I just... I don't want you to misunderstand of all people.
* nervous *
- You're an interesting girl. Just be patient with me, okay ?
* gently pats her on the head, blushing a bit *
Arelune wrote:
I'm no expert in coloring and I have to admit I got lazy so... yeah ^^'''
I am no hero at colouring either, but it kind of looks strange if half is shaded and half not. :P
I understand, I just wanted to show it soon so I don't let it rot on my computer so... ^^'
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Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

#649 Post by DeeKay »

Quick post again !
Hmm...
Hmm...
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Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

#650 Post by Hijiri »

To call back a bit on the whole 'Routes' thing, I did a route map for my own route. This route map of course implies that the person chasing me is not a student.
EDIT: Accidentally wrote 'Death' instead of 'Deal' in where it reads 'A Death with the Devil'
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Hijiri wrote:To call back a bit on the whole 'Routes' thing, I did a route map for my own route. This route map of course implies that the person chasing me is not a student.
When I read it, it sounded like a student could be the protagonist. Those are some interesting path titles and endings.
I'd probably get NICE POOL end first try ^_^;
DeeKay wrote:-DeeKay's mock-up-
Cool! Your mock-up came out well.
I wonder what's happening on the roof?
I've got to start working on mine some time.. (Gah, exams!)

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Hijiri wrote:To call back a bit on the whole 'Routes' thing, I did a route map for my own route. This route map of course implies that the person chasing me is not a student.
EDIT: Accidentally wrote 'Death' instead of 'Deal' in where it reads 'A Death with the Devil'
For some reason, I keep thinking I should avoid interacting too much with you ^^'
cuttlefish wrote:Cool! Your mock-up came out well.
I wonder what's happening on the roof?
Oh thanks ! And sorry about the "sunset on the rooftop" thing, kinda cliché but... yeah. I'll let you guys guess what's supposed to go on in this mock-up :)
cuttlefish wrote:I've got to start working on mine some time.. (Gah, exams!)
Don't feel pressured, it's for fun after all ! ^^
Good luck with your exams :)
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#653 Post by Hijiri »

DeeKay wrote:
Hijiri wrote:To call back a bit on the whole 'Routes' thing, I did a route map for my own route. This route map of course implies that the person chasing me is not a student.
EDIT: Accidentally wrote 'Death' instead of 'Deal' in where it reads 'A Death with the Devil'
For some reason, I keep thinking I should avoid interacting too much with you ^^'
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#654 Post by DeeKay »

Hijiri wrote:Could have been worse. They could have all been bad ends. Image
Oh please no ! I don't even want to think about it ! ^^'''
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#655 Post by DeeKay »

Quickly dropping this ! *flees *
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Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

#656 Post by OokamiKasumi »

DeeKay wrote:As promised, a quick revision to my sprite :
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Oooo! I like the upgrade!!!
DeeKay wrote:Quick post again !
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That looks great, DeeKay-sensei!!!
Hijiri wrote:To call back a bit on the whole 'Routes' thing, I did a route map for my own route. This route map of course implies that the person chasing me is not a student. EDIT: Accidentally wrote 'Death' instead of 'Deal' in where it reads 'A Death with the Devil'
OMG! That is beyond awesome, Hijiri-sensei!!!
-- Damn, now I need to make one too...

By the way, I love the new chibi avatar.
DeeKay wrote:Quickly dropping this ! *flees *
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Oh my God...
-- Those are fantastic! ROFLMAO!

Now this really fits!
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OokamiKasumi wrote:Oooo! I like the upgrade!!!
Why thank you ! I'm still missing quite a few concepts in coloring so that's possibly the best I can do ^^'
OokamiKasumi wrote:That looks great, DeeKay-sensei!!!
You're going to make me blush at this rate ^^'
OokamiKasumi wrote:Oh my God...
-- Those are fantastic! ROFLMAO!

Now this really fits!
loveseat.jpg
The white border can be a bit distracting, I should have paid more attention when making these :p
Haha, it actually does fit the situation !
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Re: LSF collab project (was: You know what would be awesome?

#658 Post by OokamiKasumi »

Hijiri wrote:To call back a bit on the whole 'Routes' thing, I did a route map for my own route. This route map of course implies that the person chasing me is not a student. ...
Okay, I made a Kasumi route, but I can only post the PG13 version here.
-- The R18 version is in the Adult section.

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#659 Post by DeeKay »

Dang... I'm tempted to do this as well. But I can't. I'd be too tempted to expand the backstory of my character ^^'
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#660 Post by OokamiKasumi »

DeeKay wrote:Dang... I'm tempted to do this as well. But I can't. I'd be too tempted to expand the backstory of my character ^^'
No Back-story.
-- Part of what makes a character interesting (such as Hijiri-sensei, Nimu-sensei, and you...) is wondering why they act the way they do. Once you expose their back-story, you've broken their mystery. You've rendered them explainable and Ordinary (read: boring.) Save the back-story for a special occasion, (After-school Special?) such as the sudden arrival of a long lost love, or rival -- where a back-story actually Adds to the suspense.

For a Route, all you need to do is A Typical Day for your character, BUT! through the eyes of Protag-kun, the player character.

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