Hey, great game! I think we need lots more GxB games, where the main character is female. I know I've complained and even asked companies about games like that, and they just blew me off.
I saw your thread about the dialogue being cheesy, but I don't really play demos. In any case, I think your dialogue was great, as each character seemed to have their own way of speaking, and nothing about the romance seemed cheesy at all. (I'm the same way, I worry that people will think my stories are stupid or cheesy, but I've learned that you have to give your players/readers more credit, and that they're pretty accepting of most things.)
I got all the endings except for 2 and 6, and since I got all the guys' good endings, I didn't bother to go back and find those two. Are they anything interesting at all?
You know, I think the choices in the game were pretty logical, and I didn't really have any trouble getting together with any of the guys. It was different that staying home lead to Rashad, but considering that I got his ending second, he wasn't that hard to find.
Also, something really awkward that I think I should mention. When Liany sleeps with Rashad, at first, I thought he was going to rape her, because he was so forceful. Of course, I realized he wasn't when Liany was ok with it. I know this is an artifact of the game being short, and you're trying to get the characters together. That's just how it came off to me, at first.
The fact that you can ask the guys out directly didn't bother me at all. I'm a woman, and I've done things like that before. I just figured it was part of Liany's personality.
A couple of nitpicks. I didn't like how you used different transitions. I think they should be consistent throughout a game. The fact that I noticed them at all tells me that they're distracting, and I don't think that's something you want your players to be distracted by.
And while the Q and A session for each character was unique, I think it detracted from the already compressed character development. I mean, it seemed like you removed information that you could have used in-game to develop the characters, for the "unlockable" ending. (Which wasn't all that unlockable, by the way. I expected there to be a menu choice where you could see the Q and A part again.) Specifically, I'm talking about basic information about the characters, like their age, major, and interests.
I wish it could have been longer. I would have liked to see more of the characters beyond a first date. But that's ok. I really enjoyed your game, and hope you'll continue to make such great games.