Katta wrote:Thank you so much for the stories, I really enjoyed them, my favourite being Forgive, Spell and Counting. I now so want to add a yandere character to my own project...
I also liked Secret, but the last bit "or I will have to seal your leaps" seems excess, as this part is clear without saying it explicitly, so it only lessens the feeling.
I didn't really like Accident, as there's no feeling in the letter itself, the author loses her boyfriends but all she thinks about is getting a new one. Or am I missing something here?
I think I get the idea of Expressions, but all the minor details like how he organized everything seem to distract.
I liked the beginning of Tainted, though the idea is classic, but then it gets too straightforward with sewing and amputating, I think something more subtle would be more creepy.
^^; The 100-word thing is showing again, isn't it?
Heh, the narrator of Accident is utterly self-absorbed. You know how it is with some people - wanting a boyfriend basically as an accessory, a status symbol... And that was why the addressee has been overlooked as a candidate the entire time. Of course, all this is just my headcanon >.>;; so the product probably doesn't show any signs of it at all. (I've been making stories like this since as early as Bridge, and sometimes it works, but other times it kind of implodes. Whoops.)
Wait, why am I using spoiler tags? =w=
As for the rest, thank you for your comments. I can never seem to keep my quality consistent, so it's useful to know what to keep a closer eye on. (There are the stories on my list that I'm actually embarrassed by, but I won't tell anyone which ones they are ^^;)
...Would anyone believe me if I say that these weren't intended to creep people out?
I'm an Unappreciated- ARTIST, WRITER, EDITOR, DEBATER.. You can ask me to Proofread, Draw, and whatever.*