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# You can place the script of your game in this file.
# Declare images below this line, using the image statement.
# eg. image eileen happy = "eileen_happy.png"
# Declare characters used by this game.
define e = Character('Eileen', color="#c8ffc8")
define K = Character('Kim Yong', color="#ddcc33")
define S = Character('Sin Young', color="#EE3345")
define Y = Character('Yoko', color="#DE1234")
define M = Character('Mom', color="#F234F3")
define M = Character('Myriam', color="#EA234E")
define B = Character('Brother in Law', color="#deab23")
define G = Character('Guest', color="#AD4545")
define A = Character('People', color="#345DEA")
define C = Character('General Park Joung', color="#45DDAA")
define D = Character(' Jung Mong', color="#EE33A3")
define I = Character('Inn Keeper', color="#FA2345")
define c = Character(' Wei Ming', color="#DD111D")
define s = Character('Soung Hee', color="#DD33DD")
# The game starts here.
label start:
" This is only fiction story made by me"
S " My name is Sin Young "
S " now my age is 44 years old "
S " I am worked as Detective "
S " but since 3 years ago , i not have any clients "
S " my lifestyle paided by my Sister "
S " this is morning , i gets two guest "
G "Mr. Sin , i heard about you from my friend "
S " Hahaha , not bad news "
G " Not , My Friends tell to me , when you need good detective , you must use Sin Young "
S " Who is ?"
G " He is good friend with you in past time "
S "Past Time , can you tell me who is he ? "
G " Not , I cann't tell to you , but if you are interesting with this is work why not you follow me to Border Officer "
S " Hahaha , not away , i can do that "
G " Why "
S " cause "
menu:
"Tell the truth ":
jump pasttime
"Says something":
jump anything
" silent about that":
jump notbelieveguest
label pasttime:
S " i have bad exprience with Border Officer "
G " o , Something ? "
" Myriam , Sister of Sin Young appear with a cup and a glass "
" She puts its on table "
M " Mr, My brother really need work but if you need good detective please you search another detective will can help you with good results "
G " Well , why ? "
" Sin Young quickly wake up from his seat and quickly take out His sistre out from that room "
" after some times , Sin Young back with little smile "
S " Please don't take anything what her says , she is only not like my work as Detective "
G " Of Course , how can Good Wife have troubled Brother "
S " Sorry ?"
G " O , not , I will back tommorow so if you are agree , i will driven you to My Good Friend "
S " You not drink anything "
G " Sorry Madame , i must to my Place , and hope you not get any trouble from your brother "
G " Good Morning "
S " Strange guest , ... wait he says Good Wife ? "
" Sin Young get terrified dream last night "
jump HeisGeneral
label anything:
S " I have another schedule in another place "
G " Really ? "
M " Not , since 3 year ago , he not get any work and i must pay his needed thing "
" Myriam , Sister of Sin Young appear with a cup and a glass "
" She puts its on table "
M " Mr, My brother really need work but if you need good detective please you search another detective will can help you with good results "
G " Well , why ? "
" Sin Young quickly wake up from his seat and quickly take out His sistre out from that room "
" after some times , Sin Young back with little smile "
S " Please don't take anything what her says , she is only not like my work as Detective "
G " Of Course , how can Good Wife have troubled Brother "
S " Sorry ?"
G " O , not , I will back tommorow so if you are agree , i will driven you to My Good Friend "
S " You not drink anything "
G " Sorry Madame , i must to my Place , and hope you not get any trouble from your brother "
G " Good Morning "
S " Strange guest , ... wait he says Good Wife ? "
S " he not give any money to me "
M " He is good Clients have good manner like family of Kingdom and not like another your clients "
S " Try not dreamed my sister "
M " You try not use my money again , My husband really not like that "
" Sin Young get terrified dream last night "
jump HeisGeneral
label notbelieveguest:
G " so you can do that now "
M " Why you not take that , my brother ?"
M " He not work since 3 year ago "
" Myriam , Sister of Sin Young appear with a cup and a glass "
" She puts its on table "
M " Mr, My brother really need work but if you need good detective please you search another detective will can help you with good results "
G " Well , why ? "
" Sin Young quickly wake up from his seat and quickly take out His sistre out from that room "
" after some times , Sin Young back with little smile "
S " Please don't take anything what her says , she is only not like my work as Detective "
G " Of Course , how can Good Wife have troubled Brother "
S " Sorry ?"
G " O , not , I will back tommorow so if you are agree , i will driven you to My Good Friend "
S " You not drink anything "
G " Sorry Madame , i must to my Place , and hope you not get any trouble from your brother "
G " Good Morning "
S " Strange guest , ... wait he says Good Wife ? "
S " he not give any money to me "
M " He is good Clients have good manner like family of Kingdom and not like another your clients "
S " Try not dreamed my sister "
M " You try not use my money again , My husband really not like that "
S " Why i help his in his problem , before marry with you "
M " Only for find a Cat is missing "
S " Well , His mother give me many money for find that"
" Sin Young get terrified dream last night "
jump HeisGeneral
label HeisGeneral:
" Next time the same guest came back to his office "
G " so what you are agree ?"
M " sorry my brother not can agree before you give any hint about pay "
G " O , sorry , i forget this is not my office "
S " office "
G " how about ...?"
" The Guest made a sign for wait , He is out from here "
" Sin Young quickly to window and see the guest enter a car "
S " Wow , this is car very Luxury with another car which i saw in my life until time now "
M " I think you refuse this is job "
S " Why ?"
M " i have bad dream "
S "?"
M " Mom angry with you and tell to me , not coming to see mom "
S " What ??"
" The Guest come back again with serious face "
G " Tell to me , Mr. Sin Young , what you really can swimming ?"
S " What , of course , i can "
G " you can hide the secret not matter happen ?"
S " I am Detective "
G " Not i mean when you get captured by Enemy force "
S " What !"
M " O , My dream become truth "
S " Sister , that only dream and you dream about our Mom"
G " dream about what ? what bad omen ?"
S " Not not , this is about my mother angry about me coming to see She "
M " My Mom in heaven now "
G " this is bad , this is bad , i know form beginning this is not good for do that "
M " So my Brother , i believe you must stop this is trouble work now "
S " Not away , this is what i can do now "
C " If you failed maybe you will coming to see your mother"
S " ?? , Hahaha , what more danger when i get order for spying in war "
G " War ?? so General Park is Right ?"
S " Park ? "
M " Stupid Park Joung ? or clever Park Nima ?"
G " General Park not stupid , please not tell about he like that , or you will maybe in jail or more bad that "
M " Park is bad boy ?"
M " Sound is stupid , o i forget now he is general "
M " What the , what you blackmail he , my good brother ?"
S " Not away i can do that , Mom will kill me when i meet Mom in there "
M " Yes, but what now The Stupid Park order my brother to do suicide on role now ?"
G " yes , like that , but we can refuse that role "
S " what the role ?"
M " o now you wants do hero things again "
S " Please Sister , this is conversion between men "
M " i know that , and if you get any trouble from the Stupid Park , do not approach me when this is happen "
G " your sister angry , maybe we pass this is work "
S " Not yet , This is maybe my last work as detective "
G "Last ?"
S " Well , you know , i not get any work since 3 year so maybe this is last work will be my best work after that i will retired to my born place become
gardenerman "
G " o you have plans when you are retired , i am not "
S " Do not worry i very know about Stupid Park "
G " Please not call he like that , he will terminate my rangking "
S " Hahaha do not worry about that man , i will depend you in front of he "
" Sin Young follow with his guest to Border Office "
" in That Office , He meet with old friend from his child memories "
C " Good , you look o-right now "
S " Hahaha not much time pass over now , and now you look more fatty body now "
C " how dare you insult me in this is my space of duty "
S " cause i believe you not change not matter what news is spreads in outside here "
C " this is image came from enemy and i thinks this is good for my good name "
S " Good name ? rea..."
C " now you in here this is time what you are ready for not matter order give for you ,
you must not give any hints for any people include your sister , your lover , any animals "
S " What the ?"
C " Please do sacrifice your life for our Leader "
S " What the ? so this is order for national again ? "
C " Yes , but ..."
" General Park Joung brings Sin Young to his car "
S " What the ?"
"General Park Joung ask to Sin Young for do promise under his life "
S " I promise i not tell anything about my duty to any person i meet when i do my duty and not tell to any animal when i do my duty
and i promise i not tell anything about my duty to my family , person i known and any person i know after this is my duty is done excepts My Majectic
Leader break my Promise with His words "
C " or MY NATIONS GIVE RIGHTS TO TELL ABOUT THAT "
S " OR MY NATION GIVE RIGHTS TO TELL ABOUT THAT "
S " What the ? what you not believe so you order me do that "
C " This is about protocol , if this is protocol really made by Law Duty Nation "
S " a Order not include in any Law exist in this Nation ?"
C " Yes"
" This is car enter Big Building , This is Building famous in people in there area "
" Leader House"
" After meet some guard , Sin Young meet His Leader "
K " Welcome "
S " Good Morning , Sir"
C " Good Morning , Sir "
C " This is my Friend , Sin Young "
K " So he accepts that ?"
C "Yes "
K " Thanks you very much "
" Kim Yong touch His shoulder , made Sin Young little shock "
" After that Kim Yong call someone "
D " Majetic , you call me ?"
" This is young office look strong have bold speech "
K " He will Companion with you to Island Moju "
S " Moju , SIR ?"
D " Moju , i ready "
K " Mr. Park please tell they when time is right !"
C " I ready , Sir"
" After meeting , General Park quickly bring they to a beach "
C " This is near with Island Moju , please go to that with swimming after boat came in specific place "
S " so this is mean swimming "
D " Swimming , I ready "
" Before leave General Park give some paper to Sin Young and ask him to not open before they arrive in Island Moju "
" That Boat stop after 20 miles from beach and they began swimming "
" after 30 minutes , they arrive in beach "
D " you are right , Mr. Commander "
S " Well ,I am right , but please do not call me Mr. Commander , cause people in here will suipicius about me "
D " I ready , Sir "
S " Please do not call me Sir , call me uncle okay "
S " Let's see what in Paper "
" After reading some Lines "
S " HAHAHAHA "
" This is made Jung Mong is confused "
S " HAHAHAHA , so this is mean ... HAHAHA "
D " Mr. Commander ..."
D " If Mr. Commander not wants die in here , i will closed my mouth , please give me that paper let's i alone solved that Duty "
S " NOT AWAY , you can solve that Duty , this is about a child "
D " Mr. Commader ?"
S " Child , a Child , i do that for a Child , if fail , they will deny me , deny our , we will called by name 'THE KIdnapper' "
" 3 hour after that events , two man came to a inn "
" After they purchased a room , and enter that room , Sin Young says something to Bellboy "
" After the Bellboy leave they "
D " Why you says that ? "
S " o , you mean what the best food famous in this is land ? "
S " I am hungry "
D " We should eat food , cause we need effisien use our money , cause this is come from our Nation "
S " Well , you really loyal , but this is like what we need do "
D "?"
S " Follow me , o yes what you can carry a man like weight Sumo player "
D " what you says that ? what this is have relation with word 'The Kidnapper '?"
S " yes , i am serious "
D " But this is in another Nation , i not use heard something like kidnap someone in another Nation "
S " Yes , i too , usually kidnap someone used by person come from same Nation"
D " or they use pay tribal person in shoot Black List person came to another Nation , but usually do by Nation where Black List person came "
S " yes "
D " Who is traitor ? "
S " uh , this is not like captured and kill a traitor "
D " ?"
S " you will undetstand , i fear ... "
" Sin Young keep silents , and 1 hour later the bellboy came with food "
"The Bellboy tell about amazing Chef came to this is Island recently "
"The Chef is very famous , some says The Chef before his is The Chef for Tyranny Ruler "
" Sin Young ask the Bellboy how to find cheap food but good like the food which cooked by the famous Chef "
" After get addreas , Sin Young very loud says 'this is like my friends addreas'"
" after The Bellboy leave the room "
D " Why you says that? "
S " what Cheaper ? we use money Nation , this is why we need save money so much , so The Stupid Park not kill me cause use so much money "
D " I mean ..."
S " Ah , i am need sleep now , why you not sleep too , my niece "
D " but..."
" Sin Young ignore Jung Mong and He really sleep or what the Jung Mong thinks what he is do now "
" In 10 O'Clock Morning , They leave the inn , and came to addreas what the BellBoy tell to they "
" Sin Young quickly to kitchen room of that Restaurant , and says with Loud "
S "Wei Ming , i back again "
c " what this is ? who is spoken very loud when i teach my pupil "
" Wei Ming very suprised by Sin Young when he saw Sin Young "
c " Sin Young , how came ? "
S " Why you expell? why you not happy meet me now ?"
c " i always thinks you die in war "
S " how can i die when you still have life , and do what you really like entirelly for your life "
" The Chef quickly take Sin Young to back field of that Restaurant "
" Jung Mong still in kitchen room , and do not understand what really happen "
" when the chef and Sin Young back to Kitchen Room , looks The Chef not very happy "
"But Sin Young looks really happy "
" Sin Young and Jung Mong will stay in this is Restaurant since this is day "
" But Jung Mong really not get what suppose his do in this is place "
" in early this is morning , after they stay in the Restaurant , Sin Young leave for something , with leave Jung Mong "
" Jung Mong not really like this "
D " Why he leave in early morning without says anything to me ? "
c " this is not my problem , why you not leave like this "
D " What he says to you , yesterday ? "
c " why ? i need says to you , what your uncle not says anything to you ? or he really your uncle ?"
D " He is .. my uncle "
c " sorry i busy "
" Wei Ming back again "
c " Sorry what you can help me for do cooking something or cutting something or cleaning , cause i not like my guest not pay with his energic when
they live with free "
D " sorry , i do not know about that "
" Jung Mong help the restaurants for prepare some food "
" The Restaurant get any customer and only have one chef with 4 employed plus with Jung Mong "
" When enter Afternoon , more customer than morning coming out "
" Jung Mong do count some cash money and become cassier"
" after moon can watched in the restaurant , Sin Young back now "
" Wei Ming quickly back to his room "
D " why Mr. Wei Ming like hate and fear you ?"
S " What ? "
D " Why you looks happy when i says that ? "
S " Well , Child , you need grows little , or maybe your Nation not can believe you "
D " I not child anymore ,and please says what you do in Nation Money "
S " Nation Money ? "
D " yes "
S "I do what General Park says "
" Appear something bad thought coming on mind Jung Mong "
S " What your face now ? "
S " do not worry , this is only captured black list person "
D " Black List Person , but 2 days ago , you says he/she ..."
S " Why you stop here ? "
D " not , I hope we not kill a woman "
S " So you do not wants a kill a woman for your Nation "
D " A least she is only woman not evil woman , but a evil woman can we punish not for kill too "
S " You really nice , not people always nice when come to a woman "
D " So you can tell me what the person ? "
S " he is human , do not worry this is bout keep they alive not kill they "
D " They ? include Wei Ming ? "
S " Wei Ming ? well if i can do now , but i know what he really hiding from me , not he but someone like he "
D " A chef ? "
S " Yes "
D " why ? "
S " You not like young office always keep silents not do ask question when came a task for do "
D " sorry , Sir "
D " you made me fear , maybe you will leave this is job , leave me alone "
S " job ?"
D " O i sorry "
S " Why you do formally Pose now? "
D " Please not says anything about this is , i am only dare not believe Mr. Commander "
S " young office always praised older office , when in back they always made bad report bout that "
D " i not like that , my mom always thought me about always follow advice came from old people "
S " well , do that , and now why not you sleep now "
D " What Mr. Commander do for tomorrow ?"
S " you keep in here "
D " You do not need my help "
S " Yes , keep watch over Wei Ming , maybe he will says something to Office Government this is Nation "
D " he ? "
D " i am ready "
"Like yesterday, Sin Young leave the restaurant , and Jung Mong help the restaurant "
" but when Afternoon came , Sin Young back and quickly to his room and bring all bag "
"Sin Young ask Jung Mong for leave quickly and Sin Young give a paper to Wei Ming "
"Sin Young not says anything to Jung Mong "
" They came to another city "
" When they came this is city "
"Sin Young ask to Jung Mong for waiting in fronts of a house "
" they stay in a inn"
" tommorow they walk out "
" they back in same house "
S " if you see a man out from door , quickly captured him "
S " you must pays your credits now "
" After several minutes Sin Young enter this is house "
" A man running out from door "
" Jung Mong quickly captured him "
D " Your Lordland need money now , what you really wants i sold your daughter ?"
" When Jung Mong says that , the man very shock and fear "
A " please not sold my daughter "
" when heard what the man says , Jung Mong is suprised "
"Sin Young came and together with Jung Mong take in the man to house "
"In house a girl sit on seat saw his father came again "
" The girl approach her father "
S " okay , now tell to me , where is Mr. Soung Hee ?"
A " I do not know "
S " PLease not says like this "
A " i really do not know about where Soung Hee "
S " this is very important , you know all what i mean if this is Nation find about what now i do in this is place "
A " i know , but what His really not can leave all alone , they not need His anymore "
S " But how can you says that , when your child in here ?"
A " i ... , please stop here , this is child not have relation with this is problem "
S " You really think His can do that when ..."
"Sin Young look Jung Mong "
S " please cooperate now , this is time really important "
A "What his is now will die cause sickness ? "
S " you really pessimints "
A " This is Nation always take my faith for all Nation do for me and another friends i know "
S " this is made by last Ruler not His , so if you really care about His or a least for people Nation , please tell me where Mr.Soung Hee ?"
S " Okay , do something to his daughter "
D " but , Sir her only child "
S " you see , this is Nation not send a murderman or a assassints but only older office and young office , His is not bad man "
A " But ... if His is good human , this is made more worse , cause His Office will do crazy thing for save His "
S " you really care your daughter or not ? "
A " yes "
S " Good , tell me where Mr. Soung Hee? "
A " He now in main land now "
S " what ? "
A " He is pass over border yesterday "
" After get that info , Sin Young quickly leave that city with Jung Mong "
" Sin Young and Jung Mong enter a house "
"Sin Young made communication with General Park "
S " His now in Main Land "
C " you sure about this is info ? "
S " i get this is info from two people "
C " How about the main target ? "
S " I not get any info !"
" several second passed away "
S " What you send second team like your habitual usually ? "
C " yes "
S " you will made me like Bosses Crime when i captured by Law Island Nation ?"
C " i do that now "
S " If i survived , my Sister will call me the Traitor human and the Idiot Sin "
C " yes , you always idiot , will you always loyal to this is Nation when Nation punishment your Father "
S " you really idolate my Father , i thanks for that , but i only want get any important but like hiding from culture lifestyle "
C " yes , like you , this is why your father not like you when understand what you wants in life "
S " About hiding , "
C " ..."
S " you really believe Jung Mong ?"
S " I mean Jung Mong not like our , he appear not kill someone excepts forced in war "
C " he came from poor family "
S " our all come from poor people "
C " you can believe his "
S " first i thinks you send his with me , for kill me if i fail but appear he not like killer typical "
C " please believe him and send him do what you always do in this is situation "
S " let send him for kill people ? "
C " you know what i mean !"
S " so Jung Mong not your office ? "
C " he is under me "
S " Yes , he is office military , but looks he only train his body and remember about Protocol but not his soul "
C " what you mean with that ? "
S " his like Poor child raised by rich man , like loyal dog "
C " Dog ? "
S " Dog which kill everything kill his master "
C " why says that ? you not man can read what other people mind like your mom "
S " My Mom always what in our minds and excepts my Father "
C " Please come to what you mean he like dog ?"
S " sorry if i wrong , but i think he like that for my best thinking in this is Situation "
C " he is under me "
S " what this is really about you ? not about His ? "
C " why you thinking about that "
S " You really ...what this is Nation not believe everything now control the Body Government now ? "
C " why you says stupid like that , this Nation not like ... "
S " your silents says everything "
S " please believe me "
C " believe you ??"
C " if i not can believe what mean in this is task so how can i believe you "
S " if only this is Nation not hated by many Nation "
C " how can you hope about that ? this is will bring bad omen for this is Nation "
S " I believe this is will stop war "
C " you become more like ...your Beloved Sister "
S " you right , maybe She really made out me , cause for 4 year always hear advice came from Her include her Complain "
S " i think this is much time to speak with you , so i stop now "
C " please keep watch ..."
S " Do not worry i will keep my eyes over Jung Mong "
" The Communication is end but Sin Young not leave the phone "
S " I really become confuse or they government now become difficult thing for understand "
S " mom always right , Government when meet something about problem usually human always become Unreasonable for undetrstand"
" Three day afterways , They arrive in Main Land "
" They get info Soung Hee about His addreas "
return
i don't if i can finished the game , but i lack about images in this is game ( firts i sorry if you hardly for understand what i written in this is game , cause i not native language English
first this is free game , i not have any background for this is game , not have image or character spirit for this is game .
so let's i have says , i need some character for this is game .
one old man with serious face
one girl age between 10 - 13 year old
young man have good shape of body but please not like biggest muscles but have muscle ( very nice or nice , i not can good word for detail about that )
woman with shadow so we not can saw Her face with easy
little fat but young and maybe serious but not very "Guard " or face smile but look like forced ?
man with military outfit or office outfit or a least use tie and tuxedo
two or more man old and two or more woman
if i not can finish this is game , i will put word for says to this is thread .
if you can give free , i will thanks you for you , but i give a least thanks for all which give hints for me , or give advice about story something similar with this is game ,
thanks you .


