Ens Causa Sui [Nano2013]

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Re: Ens Causa Sui [Nano2013]

#31 Post by arachni42 » Thu Apr 04, 2013 11:08 pm

chocojax wrote:I've started to call him as Thomas, though!
"Thomas" is more symbolic. I changed the name of my own MC because the first one was just a random name I liked but didn't fit her character that well.

Glad to see you're updating. The CG is cute. Their hands seem too small (the hand should be big enough to cover a person's face). But I think the eyes and mouths are quite adorable!

As far as the clothing... I'm not much into clothing, but, FWIW: I like the colors and outfit, but the ruffles aren't quite doing it for me. To me, it feels like their shape clashes a bit with the other stuff. Larger ruffles could possibly work, or a less busy lining. Or maybe if she has more ruffles elsewhere.
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