Promise To Remember (Romance)

[JayJoon]

I'm kinda new here~ :3 sorry for my super bad english I think this will be my first or second project that will be a reality because I'm gonna work a mini project in shadow.. heheh > <
This is a solo project, or maybe I'm gonna need a proofreader in the future But I enjoy it
Story
As the only son of one of the top company in the country, William can do anything as he wish. One day, his father can't take it anymore, and told him to live together with his childhood friend who has gotten success and become a fine adult. His father told him to learn from his childhood friend, Kai. When William got into the apartment, the one he met is not Kai, but a woman. What kind of mess he has gotten into?

Character
William

William

Age: 24
Blood Type: B
-Do anything as he wish
-Act like a child
-Like to sleep with a woman, and dump her on the next day (He take it only as a game)
-Irresponsible
I want to draw him a bit mature, but he turn out like a high schooler in those t-shirt

Kayla

Kayla

Age: 22
Blood Type: A
Kai's secretary (or at least that's what William think)
-Calm
-Always put a distance of stranger
-Skillful in her job
-Self conscious
-High level of justice
-Sometimes look weak
She look older than William in those outfit

Sarah
~Coming Soon~
One of William's toy, but she completely in love with him
Age: 27
Blood type: AB
-She don't like to lose
-Will do anything to achieve what she want
-Really Sensitive

Michael
~Coming Soon
One of Kai's employee
Age: 26
Blood type: B
-Happy-go-lucky type
-Pretty close with Kayla

Nathan
~Coming Soon~
William's father
Age: 61
Blood type: AB
-Rarely angry
-Won't let his son pass the boundaries

Kai

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William's childhood friend, successful in leading his company as one of the top company


Progress
-Character 25%
-Bg 0%
-CG 0%
-Story 90%
-Script 10%

I still don't know whether this will be a KN or VN..'cause you'll be seeing it from two different view..
Please tell me what you think of this in all aspect~I want to make this into a better game
And I think something's weird in William sprite, but I can't quite put my finger on it -_-"

Once again, sorry for my bad English

[Anne]

So you play as William? I wouldn't call it otome in this case.
Will there be romance? (if yes, will there be different romance options?)

[JayJoon]

So you play as William? I wouldn't call it otome in this case.
Will there be romance? (if yes, will there be different romance options?)

You will play from two view point, from William's view point and Kayla's viewpoint. When it reach a certain point of story, the view point will be changed.
Thanks for mentioning though~ gonna change it to romance, than using otome.
There will be romance since my head mostly made from romance... muhahaha /slap

[gekiganwing]

I still don't know whether this will be a KN or VN..'cause you'll be seeing it from two different view..

This is an important thing to consider. Do you want just one of your point of view characters to make decisions? Both of them? Neither of them? Think about this as you write.

Please tell me what you think of this in all aspect~ I want to make this into a better game

From what you wrote, it seems that William starts out the story at age 24 (recent college grad?) and has three things which many men want: a lot of money, not many responsibilities, and a lot of opportunities to have sex with women. This provides a number of options...

1a. It sounds like he's on step one or two of The Hero's Journey. (If you're unfamiliar with that phrase, or the term "monomyth", read up on it. It's an outline that has been used to study stories through history.) In other words, his father gives him a Call to Adventure by telling him to become a more mature person. It might help if William isn't completely satisfied with his life.

1b. If you have time, read the book 45 Master Characters. It talks about using archetypal characters that can be traced back to mythology. Unless I've confused it with another book, it also has a lot to say about The Hero's Journey in a modern setting, as well as the differences between men's journeys and women's journeys (The Epic of Gilgamesh is contrasted with The Descent of Inanna.)

2. How much of a role with Sarah have?

3. If Michael is close to Kayla, will he be a rival?

4. Willliam and Kai start off as friends. How much will Kai figure into the story?

[JayJoon]

sorry for the late reply >_< just finished my final test

This is an important thing to consider. Do you want just one of your point of view characters to make decisions? Both of them? Neither of them? Think about this as you write.

Yeah, have been thinking a lot, and for my first project, I think I'll go for KN. I'll just focused on the story.

From what you wrote, it seems that William starts out the story at age 24 (recent college grad?) and has three things which many men want: a lot of money, not many responsibilities, and a lot of opportunities to have sex with women. This provides a number of options...

1a. It sounds like he's on step one or two of The Hero's Journey. (If you're unfamiliar with that phrase, or the term "monomyth", read up on it. It's an outline that has been used to study stories through history.) In other words, his father gives him a Call to Adventure by telling him to become a more mature person. It might help if William isn't completely satisfied with his life.

1b. If you have time, read the book 45 Master Characters. It talks about using archetypal characters that can be traced back to mythology. Unless I've confused it with another book, it also has a lot to say about The Hero's Journey in a modern setting, as well as the differences between men's journeys and women's journeys (The Epic of Gilgamesh is contrasted with The Descent of Inanna.)

2. How much of a role with Sarah have?

3. If Michael is close to Kayla, will he be a rival?

4. Willliam and Kai start off as friends. How much will Kai figure into the story?

1. I don't know what that is.. But I'll search for it Thanks for mentioning

2. Actually it will be a story of romance between William and Kayla, and their past. Yeah.. Not really interesting

3. William take him as a rival, but actually he shouldn't mind him, since Kayla is ... Gaahh... almost tell spoiler...

Actually Kayla is Kai. They were childhood friend, back then Kayla is a tomboy, so William think she's he.

4. Kai will be monitoring William action, and communicate with him through notes.