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Love Target! (GxB,Slice-of-Life,Comedy,Unexpected Ends?)

#1 Post by Ramunai » Wed Jun 19, 2013 12:37 am

"In the race which some call life, I aim to be at the top at the love department!"

Many people have a goal in life and Yurica's is finding love—true love—as soon as possible. She doesn't want to wait for college, university or work to find The One. She only wants to find him (hopefully) before her final year of high school since she's pretty sure that her mom will hold a knife over her throat just to make her study for those 'important exams that determines her future'.

Will our determined little Yurica achieve her goal or will she be hurt among some others instead?
★Characters★
Matsumoto Yurica 17
The boy-crazy, comical and happy-go-lucky/childish high school student. She's playful and enjoys teasing her best friend. Her motto for life is: "To find love is the only reason I'm living now!" However, don't let her seemingly ditzy personality fool you. This girl has a surprisingly insightful mind and can be very mature and serious when the situation calls for it.

Nomura Sakuya 17
The quiet and blunt best friend of Yurica. Her blunt personality and pessimism is what makes guys walk away from her despite her pretty looks, or so Yurica constantly tells her. Therefore, she is actually quite hopeless around males and the topic of love.

Shiroyama Hiro 17, romance-able
The insanely popular star of the soccer club. Despite that, he doesn't enjoy socializing much, especially with his fan girls, and he doesn't have much friends. He keeps people at bay because of a belief he has.

Yukimura Toushi 18, romance-able
The serious and reliable president of the student council. He is the smartest student in the entire school and has zero tolerance for slackers. He is quite popular among girls because of his looks, intelligence and background...However, not much is actually known about him and all the "facts" are mainly made up from the beliefs of his admirers.

Tonegawa Shin 16, romance-able
The adorable and strong-willed student. He quite naive and is well-liked by many, but is usually bullied (well...more like cornered to do favors) by others because he has this horrible trait of being unable to say no to friends. He is extremely good at cooking and arts.

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★Progress★
Story: 100%
Script: 30%
Sprites: 100%
Background: 100%

PS: Just to clear up any future confusions, sprites and backgrounds are not done by me. They're free and are on the internet for anyone to use. I don't draw well enough with a tablet to use my own art for a game :)

I might edit some stuff here and I'll be keeping this post updated (since it's actually here for me to check on my own progress, ehehehe...)
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#2 Post by D`Angel18 » Thu Jun 20, 2013 1:04 pm

Interesting story can't wait for it especially the twist and turns you'll add on this game. ^^,
I'll be lurking here. :wink:
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#3 Post by Ramunai » Fri Jun 21, 2013 10:48 pm

D`Angel18 wrote:Interesting story can't wait for it especially the twist and turns you'll add on this game. ^^,
I'll be lurking here. :wink:
Thank you~
I'm doing my very best to make this game surprising at unexpected times :D
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#4 Post by Ramunai » Sun Oct 20, 2013 2:06 am

★Updates★
20/10/2013
Plot for the story line is completed, though I might make some unexpected changes along the way...but hey, the (rough) draft is completed! Also, the characterization of the characters might not be a 100% shown depending on what the final result is.

Script is at 30% with 3331 words and I'm still indecisive about adding background music OTL. I'll leave that for later...
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#5 Post by silverpikachu99 » Sun Oct 20, 2013 10:44 am

Good luck finishing this~ I look forward to playing love target!
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#6 Post by Kyra10 » Sun Oct 20, 2013 1:00 pm

This looks interesting~
I'll play this when it comes out for sure!
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#7 Post by -LKays » Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:05 pm

That looks great...I love your art. :) when do you think you'll finish it? I'll be waiting... >.<

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#8 Post by MaiMai » Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:57 pm

-LKays wrote:That looks great...I love your art. :) when do you think you'll finish it? I'll be waiting... >.<
It's not original art, they're Tokudaya sprites that are free to use along with the backgrounds I'm assuming.
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#9 Post by Ramunai » Mon Oct 21, 2013 2:14 am

silverpikachu99 wrote:Good luck finishing this~ I look forward to playing love target!
Thank you! I'll be doing my best <3
Kyra10 wrote:This looks interesting~
I'll play this when it comes out for sure!
:)
Thank you~ I'm doing my best to make this game comical but also make it relatable to people...well, I'm not exactly sure about the latter but I'm trying! x'D
-LKays wrote:That looks great...I love your art. :) when do you think you'll finish it? I'll be waiting... >.<
I estimate that I'll be done with this in December since I have my finals to do in November (school sucks, haha), or maybe a little after January since this game will definitely need a lot of polishing considering it's my first one :)
Also, the art isn't drawn by me. The sprites are free as are the backgrounds. I've only done some edits to the sprites and backgrounds to accommodate the story line.
MaiMai wrote:-LKays wrote:
That looks great...I love your art. :) when do you think you'll finish it? I'll be waiting... >.<

It's not original art, they're Tokudaya sprites that are free to use along with the backgrounds I'm assuming.
Yes, you're right :D
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#10 Post by try10 » Mon Oct 21, 2013 3:21 am

This looks interesting enough. I'm willing to play it when it's finished. Good luck! ;)

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#11 Post by -LKays » Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:02 am

MaiMai wrote:
-LKays wrote:That looks great...I love your art. :) when do you think you'll finish it? I'll be waiting... >.<
It's not original art, they're Tokudaya sprites that are free to use along with the backgrounds I'm assuming.
Wow seriously? Well in any case the game is still interesting :P

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#12 Post by Sayashiro » Mon Oct 21, 2013 10:41 pm

Oh my gosh! This VN looks adorable! I will definitely follow this~
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#13 Post by Ramunai » Sat Oct 26, 2013 10:40 am

try10 wrote:This looks interesting enough. I'm willing to play it when it's finished. Good luck! ;)
Thank you! Will do my best to not disappoint anyone :D
Sayashiro wrote:Oh my gosh! This VN looks adorable! I will definitely follow this~
Hehe, thank you~ This game is intended by all means to be cute and comical but also relatable xD
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Re: Love Target! (GxB,Slice-of-Life,Comedy,Unexpected Ends?)

#14 Post by Ramunai » Fri Nov 01, 2013 12:47 am

★Updates★
01/11/2013
There are 3 endings for each romance-able character; Happy, Normal, and Bad.
Also, there is a "secret ending" (or call it more of a surprise scene?) for one of the romance-able characters.

...There might be more secret endings (for all romance-able characters to be fair) in the final product...when I get a hang of everything OTL
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