Fatal Cooking [Crack]

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Fatal Cooking [Crack]

#1 Post by sate_padang » Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:26 am

This is my first (serious) attempt at making VN.
Story : An unnamed protagonist make an attempt at cooking, which likely will end in disaster.
Short, 6 endings, crack and not meant to be taken seriously.

Screenshot :
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Misleading main menu :D

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Characters :
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An annoying recipe book.

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The hottest character in the game.

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A cute, little cupcake....or is it?

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A failed attempt at cooking. He doesn't like you either.


Reviews and comments are appreciated.
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Re: Fatal Cooking [Crack]

#2 Post by distorsion » Thu Sep 05, 2013 9:42 am

Could you tell us the general premise and the characters please?
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Re: Fatal Cooking [Crack]

#3 Post by soraibi » Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:18 am

I just played this out of boredom and the game had really simple art and it was quite fun. The stories were short and simple. I was laughing at Ending 6 because of how ridiculous it was and that the music was quite fitting for it! The best points for this game goes to the music; I really liked the song at the main menu! lol I got all the endings yay!! :D
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#4 Post by merdeamour » Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:08 am

I liked the art--especially the BG art xD I've only got one ending (which I forgot what number it is...) Good job with completing a game~!
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#5 Post by hikaa212 » Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:21 am

ahahaha this so fun xD it's simple and the arts are so cute and yeah like said the musics are fitting :lol: good job~
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#6 Post by Sheridan » Fri Sep 06, 2013 1:23 pm

I have never seen such an adorable evil hamburger! That was my favorite ending. Overall, very cute game.

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Re: Fatal Cooking [Crack]

#7 Post by sate_padang » Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:56 pm

Sheridan wrote:I have never seen such an adorable evil hamburger! That was my favorite ending. Overall, very cute game.
Thank you!
hikaa212 wrote:ahahaha this so fun xD it's simple and the arts are so cute and yeah like said the musics are fitting :lol: good job~
Yeah, my friend said that too... It took me a quite while to search some free musics as most results are too loud, I edited it later. Glad you like it!
merdeamour wrote:I liked the art--especially the BG art xD I've only got one ending (which I forgot what number it is...) Good job with completing a game~!
Thank you! For those interested, here's some walkthrough.
The right ingredients :
water, noodles, spice and chili, egg. prayer is optional
The wrong ingredients :
Syrup, candy, expired flour,rotten egg.
The worst ingredients :
Mosquito repellant, recipe book, nail and bolts, trash, *some private parts*

Ending 3: READ the book and use ALL the right ingredients. Or, you could IGNORE the book but you must ADD prayer later.
DO NOT leave. This is the only (exaggerating) good ending.

Ending 6 :Add ANY of the worst ingredients. DO NOT leave. I think most players get this ending since it's so tempting :lol:

Ending 1: Add ANY of the worst ingredients, then LEAVE.

Ending 2: AVOID adding any of the worst ingredients, then LEAVE.

Ending 4: AVOID adding any of the worst ingredients. ADD some of the wrong ingredients (or, you could IGNORE the book and DO NOT add prayer later).
DO NOT LEAVE. EAT it.

Ending 5:AVOID adding any of the worst ingredients. ADD some of the wrong ingredients (or, you could IGNORE the book and DO NOT add prayer later).
DO NOT LEAVE. DO NOT eat it.

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