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Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 2:03 pm
by konett
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This first post is out dated. Please look at pages 2-3 for more current stuff.

Enter the forrest of Barania, and play as Karotte, a young elven girl. Karotte has a huge gap in memories from last year's Summer Solstice period. The next Solstice is right around the corner and Karotte keeps having disturbing nightmares and daydreams. She is sick of them! What do they mean? Karotte has the feeling that something really bad happened, but she just can't remember!

Go on a journey to collect all you memory keys, before someone else does! Help people, solve mysteries, play mini-games, fight monsters and gather spirit power to find and collect all of Karotte's Memory Keys and help the friends you make keep your home out of the clutches of evil!


Genre:
  • Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery, Romance, Friendship
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Planned Features:
  • ▪ ~40,000 words
    ▪ 5 Story Endings
    8 Relationship Endings
    ▪ 4 Unlockable Areas
    ▪ 12 Quests
    ▪ Mini Games
Progress:
  • ▪ Outlines 80%
    ▪ Script 10%
    ▪ Sprites 20%
    ▪ CGs 18%
    ▪ BGs: 20%
    ▪ GUI 40%
    ▪ Extras 20%
    ▪ Programming 30%

So far this is a solo project, so it won't be going very fast, but I have planned to have at least a demo out by mid December. The art and design-side of this thing is the only side I'm really experienced in. I do have some 100+ hours of struggling with Ren'Py and I've written chapters and shorts since I was 10, but never made them into anything. I've done research on writing, so I'm hoping it will work itself out. I'm kind of nervous about this whole project, but I'd love feedback on the stuff I post here!

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 2:20 pm
by Katta
Wow, the art is gorgeous!

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 3:00 pm
by Hazel-Bun
D8 This. Looks. Amazing!! I really like Karotte's style and the art direction in general ^^ Animated BGs are pure yes. The only thing I'd really say for now (as you've stated not much in the way of writing has been made) is that the text is very light and hard to read on a white textbox. Otherwise, everything looks good!

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 4:01 pm
by Alera
Amg, this is so pretty!!! *A* Really amazing, can't wait to see how it goes, good luck, it's amazing so far!!!

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 7:08 pm
by Kyra10
I am absolutely loving the art! <3
Can't wait to play this~

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 7:47 pm
by Auro-Cyanide
*whistle* Wow, this looks amazing. Count me both impressed and looking forward to your project :D Good luck!

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 8:54 pm
by 15385bic
stunning! and wow - working solo? D8 !?
i'm super impressed!
good luck with this one~
agrees with hazel - the text is a little hard to read in the top right pic
but otherwise everything is beautiful~

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Wed Oct 02, 2013 9:09 pm
by MaiMai
You got me at the art, GxB, fantasy, and ELVES!! Everything looks solid.

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2013 12:05 am
by Golden.Fleece
Great planning, fantastic art - this project have all the plus buttons from me. Triple thumbs up!

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2013 12:56 am
by wererat42
Animated backgrounds? Don't see that too often.
Are you planning to have animated sprites too? As in blinking and mouth movement.

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2013 1:39 am
by sendo
Wow this looks very very promising. The art is just amazing. And you're doing it alone? Man, I wish I can be dedicated like you. Anyways, looking forward to this one :)

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2013 3:11 am
by try10
The art looks gorgeous! ELVES!? I'm in love! I'll be watching this! :D

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2013 3:45 pm
by silverpikachu99
Your art style is adorable~!!! Can't wait for this!!

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2013 6:33 pm
by Mad_Scientist
Ad my voice to those who thinks this looks really cool. I don't see animated backgrounds like that very often. The visuals and the premise give me something of a neat fairy tail vibe, which I like. Definitely looking forward to seeing more from this.

Re: Memento Karotte [GxB/G][Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery]

Posted: Thu Oct 03, 2013 8:06 pm
by Green Glasses Girl
Like everyone else has said, the art is beautiful! Lovely, lovely, lovely.

Also, I agree that the textbox text is hard to read in the top right hand screenshot. I'm not sure if increasing the opacity for the textbox is the solution? You should test out some combinations and see.