People die every day, but not like this, not in this town. Foxhills is just a small town where everyone know each other so well, a small town with a nice people and nice families, it's almost cliché. Nothing like this happened before, it's so out of ordinary.
But it's normal, right? Bad things always happen to good people.
"Yes, you shitty buggering fuck, I'm telling you this killer is a SERIAL KILLER YOU DICK"
Chloe
A detective. She's smart, sharp, and loyal. She's a good police but the feminist-policewoman-stereotype give her no chance to prove her ability. But not this time, when she got her hand on a big case. She'll not just let this chance slip away, she have to find the killer, no matter how.
"Chloe, I just wondering, do you have to swear all the time?"
Arthur
Chloe's partner. He's the only one who see Chloe's ability and talk to everyone for her to work on this case. He's a good guy, but she might admit that she always hear some co-workers whisper something bad about him when he walk pass them. And she know-- she think she know, that Arthur is hiding some really, really, bad secret from her.
"... I'll not discuss this with you"
Sean
A lover of the first victim. When she died, no one know yet this is the serial killer, and no one pay attention to her dead because they think it's absolutely normal for a prostitute to die in the dirty side of town. But Sean can swear to any souls that his lover will never done something like that, she's hardly let an opposite sex stare at her, let alone prostitute. But he couldn't explain either why did she went there, and why she dressed like that...
"No one is going to believe you, they believe me."
Lucas
A famous reporter from The Daily Catch. He's famous for revealing the unseen dirty secret of a big companies, a politicians and solve the unsolved crimes. He's also know as a man without fear. But somehow this Foxhills's crime make him seal his mouth shut. Why?
"I want to see my lawyer, immediately"
Gabriel
A suspect from third crime. He said he's done nothing wrong, but he doesn't even attempt to make people believe it. He look like he always afraid of something, and never said anything instead of "I want to see my lawyer" All evidence and witness point directly to him. And Gabriel still doesn't tell anything to protect himself.
"Oops, sorry I forgot I'm dead."
Jayden
A ghost of second victim. Chloe can't believe her eyes she's really seeing a ghost. She really want to believe it's just her hallucination, but it's just seems so real. However, he can't just arrest someone because a ghost told her so, it's stupid. No, Chole will never take his information serious, which is great, because he remember NOTHING about his dead.
"Are you sure you're real? You're just so perfect I'm sure I made you up in my mind"
Victor
An ordinary man in town. He's somewhat flirting with her. He's kind of sweet though, that type of guy who will be your high school crush. Everyone know Victor because he's born and live here, he's normal and harmless. But Chloe and him accidentally meet each other in places Victor shouldn't suppose to be. Maybe a little sneak on him wouldn't hurt...
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This is my first visual novel, and my first topic in this forum as well! I'm new here, and I want to know some feed back, what do you guys think? Is it interesting enough? Well, I'm all ears!
I'm hesitate to creating this topic, I don't know I should creating it in 'Ideas' or 'Work in Progress' but I guess I'll create here because it's not just an ideas, yet we not have much to show, but we're currently working on it! (the story is done, we're working on script and sprites, background and music would be pain in the arse but we're working on it! haha.)
I'll update our progress later : )
Here is my Artist, Sanakakun, visit her fanpage!
Also, sorry for my language. I already have an editor now, it'll be better when it's release!
