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Challenge me to write something.

#1 Post by fsc » Tue Oct 22, 2013 4:55 am

So, I've been registered for a while, but I've never posted anything.

I join this community to refine my story writing skills (Which is literally zero), I have some sick plots (In my own perception) in my repository for serious projects. However I am not that confident to publish them yet. So meanwhile, I want to start some little things.

Here's my point, give me theme for my next short story, I don't care how random it is (i.e. slice of life; aliens; apocalypse; yuri; or even toilets.). Three first theme that submitted to this matter shall be the main subject for aforementioned story.

So, give me your worst. :mrgreen:

[UPDATE 06/12/13] So, I finished this challenge. Here's the link for the story: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 47&t=24219
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#2 Post by Katta » Tue Oct 22, 2013 7:38 am

Elf rangers patrolling the forest)

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#3 Post by sendo » Tue Oct 22, 2013 7:46 am

fsc wrote:my story writing skills (Which is literally zero), I have some sick plots (In my own perception)
Story of my life.

Anyway, I glimpsed National Geographic earlier and the episode was related to the Nazca Lines.

I think this has potential to develop into a good Alien Invasion/Alternate History/Mystery kind of story. I personally want the alien take on this one. But hey, as long as it is a good read, anything goes. So there :)
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#4 Post by fsc » Tue Oct 22, 2013 8:40 am

Katta wrote:Elf rangers patrolling the forest)
crestforge wrote:Nazca Lines.
Now, how I combine them...
Welp, a promise is a promise. One more theme to add and I'll set.

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#5 Post by Taleweaver » Tue Oct 22, 2013 8:54 am

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#6 Post by Delta m.m » Tue Oct 22, 2013 9:06 am

A person who suffers from amnesia, unexplained fear and anxiety and in possession of very technologically advanced equipments and some self-defense small arms.

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#7 Post by fsc » Tue Oct 22, 2013 9:16 am

Taleweaver wrote:This belongs in Asset Creation: Writing.
I aware that this might be a problem, pardon my unsophistication. m(_ _)m
Katta wrote:Elf rangers patrolling the forest)
crestforge wrote:Nazca Lines.
Delta m.m wrote:A person who suffers from amnesia, unexplained fear and anxiety and in possession of very technologically advanced equipments and some self-defense small arms.
Allright, three themes gathered. :D
Soon I'll make a short story from these topics. :wink:

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#8 Post by fsc » Fri Nov 01, 2013 10:38 pm

Updating this thread.
Slowly but steady, I am still writing the story.
At first I project ten pages, but now I'm skeptic that I'll reach 23 pages. :|

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#9 Post by Katta » Fri Nov 01, 2013 11:00 pm

I'm so curious)
I've tried to read the text on the screenshot, but it's too small :cry:

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#10 Post by fsc » Sat Nov 02, 2013 3:52 am

Better quality.
link: http://i.imgur.com/pb2Qx6s.jpg

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#11 Post by Katta » Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:59 am

You are so kind :lol:

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#12 Post by fsc » Fri Dec 06, 2013 2:08 am

So, I finished this challenge. Here's the link for the story: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 47&t=24219

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