Mirage Noir Prologue [BxG] [Fantasy] [Mystery]

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Mirage Noir Prologue [BxG] [Fantasy] [Mystery]

#1 Post by Noire » Wed Dec 04, 2013 2:48 pm

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A young local witch, while searching for her familliar, finds a strange glade deep down in the forest. Surprisingly, she finds an unconscious, worn out man, who needs immediate help. Ignoring her common sense she takes him to her place and does her best, healing his wounds and frostbites. Their meeting is a start of a strange story, that will shake their world.

[General Info]
This is a stand alone re-do of Mirage Noir Prologue. There will be more parts under the name of "Mirage Noir"
Check this topic for the newest info: https://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/view ... 43&t=23370

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The main place when you can currently view all presentable data about the game is this deviantART account: ImageMirage Noir Group
Other notable place is twitter, where I post game production updates: https://twitter.com/MonedulaStudio
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#2 Post by xYuukix » Wed Dec 04, 2013 3:37 pm

Congrats on the released and I like the art and this sounds really interesting.Will download as soon as I get to my com ^^

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#3 Post by silverpikachu99 » Wed Dec 04, 2013 7:13 pm

Congratulations on the release! I'll be sure to play it all, then give you my review after! :)
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#4 Post by DeletedUser160413 » Wed Dec 04, 2013 8:01 pm

This game looks absolutely amazing. I love all the graphics, like omg I'm downloading it now!

Edit: I really love it, but I have some tips for you :) I think you should customize the textbox more, because it just doesnt fit the art. It also kind of distracts me from reading the text.

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#5 Post by Ran08 » Thu Dec 05, 2013 6:23 am

I just finished playing it, and it was really awesome. I even made a review of it! Lol. Hahaha. At first I was confused and everything, so I kinda sped through everything, but when I got to the part where Vienna found Vesper... oh my gosh. Hahaha. He's so beautiful. And the story is really awesome, I just loved it.
It was amusing to watch Vesper and Vienna try to outwit each other. I loved their interactions, there seems to be a beautiful chemistry between these two.
Although, this left me heartbroken. Huuuuu. :( When will you release the next chapter? I must know what happens next!

Goodluck on the next one! Please keep making visual novels!

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#6 Post by Noire » Thu Dec 05, 2013 6:45 pm

Congratulations on the release! I'll be sure to play it all, then give you my review after! :)
Thank you :) I'd love to read it :)
Edit: I really love it, but I have some tips for you :) I think you should customize the textbox more, because it just doesnt fit the art. It also kind of distracts me from reading the text.
Is it too dark? I wanted to keep it rather simple and non fancy, but maybe I failed there :D What would fit it better?
Although, this left me heartbroken. Huuuuu. :( When will you release the next chapter? I must know what happens next!

Goodluck on the next one! Please keep making visual novels!
I'm a terrible person, I know :D
I aim for February/March if my sickness won't get any worse.
And thank you so much for the review! ^_^

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#7 Post by DeletedUser160413 » Thu Dec 05, 2013 7:25 pm

I wanted to keep it rather simple and non fancy, but maybe I failed there :D What would fit it better?
There's one textbox that is black, and its more of a window instead of it reaching the sides of the game-window (i dont know if I'm being clear enough, sorry) and also, I'm not so sure about this so correct me if I'm wrong but I think it had a border. These were the things that I noticed. Also, I liked the text but I think you should change the color of the characters names. But its all just what I noticed, someone else might like it so its your decision :) everything else was beautiful

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#8 Post by Hachiko » Mon Dec 09, 2013 11:11 am

That little bit in the end really shocked me. I didn't think Vesper would do such a thing! :S Also, maybe making a new topic would be okay? Since it's gonna be episodic anyways >.>

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#9 Post by Junesong » Fri Dec 20, 2013 9:19 pm

Looks really good, the sprites and CG's are amazing, will definitely play!^^

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#10 Post by Lesleigh63 » Fri Jun 06, 2014 12:19 am

I feel this may have a very good premise to it.

Some of the artwork is done well, while some of the artwork looks unfinished (or maybe it's been enlarged which is why it looks less polished than the rest).

The writing is a little uneven (I'm guessing English isn't your first language).

But a good start, just needs to be polished up a bit.
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#11 Post by philip » Sun Jun 08, 2014 7:48 pm

Just finished going through this story, found it very interesting, and will be looking forward to more!

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#12 Post by Crubitz » Fri Aug 22, 2014 11:26 am

Just downloaded this and I'm looking forward to it. I gotta ask, I'm going through the comic(s) at Mirage-noire.com and they are funny but in a mature manner, is the Visual Novel the same? Is it for mature audiences? Didn't see any age tags so I want to know what I'm getting myself into (will read it regardless anyway :mrgreen:)....

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#13 Post by Noire » Fri Apr 09, 2021 1:17 pm

I've updated the first post with the new version of the game.
Most of the graphics are new (90%) and the story is fixed. Hope you'll like it :)

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