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by The Scribbler » Mon Mar 31, 2014 7:37 pm
I really liked the presentation, the initial menu worked incredibly well in setting the right atmosphere. In a way, it reminded me of stuff like "Anna"'s menu.
It was fairly short, but I'm really impressed at what you did with your resources. I generally don't like Comipo stuff much, but you put everything together very effectively. The directing is masterfully done, particularly in the way you used sound and animations together.
I did find a few typos (a mispelling of "definitely" and several instances of commas followed by capitalised sentences. It's a pity it was so short, but still - I value the experience a lot, thanks for sharing!
(And damnit, I wrote a mail to you about proofreading but you never replied. :/)