★ The Abyss (Mystery,Romance GxB/G) ★

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★ The Abyss (Mystery,Romance GxB/G) ★

#1 Post by Noctelle » Sat Mar 01, 2014 3:12 pm

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Title: Abyss
Themes: Mystery, Romance, Drama, Fantasy. GxB and GxG
Rating:14-16+ as things may get suggestive but not much farther than that.
Plot:Airrie finds herself falling through a dark sky, hitting the ground she feels her head split open and her bones break, sure she is dieing..

Waking to the cold chill of a dark cave with only the stars soft light shining through the overhead opening to guide her, she realizes somethings wrong, didn’t she just die? and where is she?
After Finding a strange house in the middle of nowhere, she’s relieved that there are others like her. But these strange people and the house aren’t the only thing lost in the dark..

Who are the strange creatures that glow in the everlasting night?.
After Finding a strange house in the middle of nowhere, she's relieved that there are others like her. But these strange people and the house aren't the only thing lost in the dark..

Characters:

Ari-
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"How did I get here? and how can I get back?"
The main character. Sarcastic, thoughtful and cautious, she takes awhile to open up to people, shes not very good with dealing with stress. (* no image for her at this second, will upload later)
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LOVE INTERESTS:

Luca- The boy you end up living with Isis with. Kind, talkative, and generally gentle heart-ed he puts up a front to keep people from finding out how irritable and lonely he actually is. Find’s you (the main character) to be soothing, and can’t deal with Iris’s constant attention grabbing (of the you attention) He like you has little memories about where he came from and why he is in this dark world.
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????*/ Mysterious Man- A shy, mysterious and quiet man who you seem to keep bumping into periodically Luca warns you he’s dangerous, you don’t see it AT all. Seems to be watching over you from afar yet runs away when ever you get close. His garments literally glow in the dark, making him easy to spot. Though he is definitely not easy to catch
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????*/ Mysterious Lady- A strong willed and empathetic lady, she like the mysterious man seems to constantly be watching over you. She seems to be trying to keep you safe, yet like a deer runs away when you notice she’s near. Like the man she has glowing garments as well, making her easy to spot. Shes quite stealthy though, and gets caught less than the man does.
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Iris- Your other house mate. Shes loud, proud and loves a good story or adventure, constantly tries to steal your attention from Luca as she constantly reminds you she dislikes him. She and him clash as far as personalities go and they don’t get along well.

Screenshots & W.I.P:
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Concept & scrapped work:
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Progress log:
March 1- Start, Upload concepts.
March 2- Finish 1st of Isis's Sprites & Finished Logo.

Questions for you:
1. What do you think so far?

2. anything else? (though, I suppose its a bit early for that, haha <3)

3. Art critique?? I just got a tablet and I'm just getting used to digital, any suggestions and critique on that would be much appreciated <3
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#2 Post by Googaboga » Sat Mar 01, 2014 9:34 pm

1. What do you think so far?

It all sounds very intriguing. Mysteries are fun ^^.

2. anything else? Critique would be appreciated <3

I don't know how to pronounce 'Airrie' XD. Other than that just good luck on your project. I'd have to know a little more about the project to give any kind of decent critique. Sorry about that.
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Re: Abyss (VN) (NaNaReno 2014) (Mystery, GxB/G)

#3 Post by Noctelle » Sat Mar 01, 2014 9:58 pm

Googaboga wrote:1. What do you think so far?

It all sounds very intriguing. Mysteries are fun ^^.

2. anything else? Critique would be appreciated <3

I don't know how to pronounce 'Airrie' XD. Other than that just good luck on your project. I'd have to know a little more about the project to give any kind of decent critique. Sorry about that.
Mysteries are my favorite, so I figured I should make one for Nanareno. :3

I pronounce it like (AI-REE-eh) xD, and I figured as much, I'll have to post some text samples before I can expect a critique lol. xD Thank you regardless :3

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Re: Abyss (VN) (NaNaReno 2014) (Mystery, GxB/G)

#4 Post by Rinima » Sat Mar 01, 2014 10:59 pm

Ohhh, I like the concept :3
The hair is intriguing XD (in a good way)
Pronouns: They/them or He/him

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Re: Abyss (VN) (NaNaReno 2014) (Mystery, GxB/G)

#5 Post by Noctelle » Sat Mar 01, 2014 11:07 pm

Rinima wrote:Ohhh, I like the concept :3
The hair is intriguing XD (in a good way)

Thank you :3 And I'm glad you like their hair, :3 its one of my favorite things to draw. xD

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