Redlining help/Critiques for a few horror game CGs!

[Coren]

Hey guys, I'm still having some anatomical issues orz and I really really don't want to detract from a horror game experience with poor anatomical structure or funny-looking art. So if anyone could help point out the errors I have in the sketches below, that would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!

[Nekomiira]

Ok,why am I trying to help and redline stuff at 2 am??

I didn't notice that many mistakes on the first one:
I'd say the head was positioned a bit too much to the left, the shoulder proportions were a little off and her left arm looked a little too thin so I tried redlining those^^' (also I moved her head, but you can probably see that) And then I ended up redlining her entire upper body...so yeah. I hope this helps somehow c:

[Coren]

Thanks so much Nekomiira! And sorry for keeping you up this late into the night, heh. Greatly appreciated!

[khnachi]

I tried...I just think that there arms are a bit too long.
Anyway this is my first time red lining something so I hope this helps.

[Nekomiira]

@Coren You're welcome^^ I redlined the third one too, you seemed to have problems with her hands. (This was done more quickly, but I hope this will help you)

[King-sama]

I tried to do the girls, hope it helps :>

[naqlada]

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I tried...I just think that there arms are a bit too long.

You should see my arms ._.

I'm not seeing as much as others have pointed out. Hands seems a bit small and keep an eye on the feet. That's all I can point out.

[Coren]

Thanks a bunch, guys, it really helps.