Ivy [short KN] [beta]

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Ivy [short KN] [beta]

#1 Post by korova » Sat Apr 12, 2014 5:59 pm

Hello !

I'm happy to release beta version of my very short Kinetic novel "Ivy"

I wrote this to train myself in writing. Here is my method : I select a keyword, perform a search in Flickr (I'm not a graphic artist at all), choose 5-6 photos and try to imagine a story to go with it.
Then I put it together in Ren"Py, with music and sound for ambiance.
This is also an occasion to train to Ren'Py coding.

Here is the result of my first attempt :
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The plot
Ivy is a famous singer, but she has a secret... Her fame comes from a supernatural cause...

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  • Kinetic novel - NVL mode
  • short story (1082 words) -
  • Native language : french - english translation provided (from main menu and preferences)
  • Graphics and music from Flickr, Jamendo and freesound (Creative commons only)
  • Story, writing and coding by me, CC-BY-SA
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Disclaimer
English is not my native language, but I made a quick translation so that people here could read my work. However I intend to ask my colleagues that teach english to review my work. French version is of course a better choice if you can read it.
Nonetheless, if you find mispellings or translations errors, I'd be happy to know.
I'd also be interested to know if there is any strange behaviour in my game (especially windows or MacOSX versions, as I work mostly on linux)

Thanks for your help and critiques.

Download links [edit : new links]
Ivy_multi-win.zip
Ivy - Windows - English/Français
(54.55 MiB) Downloaded 36 times
Ivy_multi-linux.tar.bz2
Ivy - Linux - English/Français
(56.56 MiB) Downloaded 25 times
Ivy_multi-mac.zip
Ivy - Mac OS X - English/Français
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Last edited by korova on Sat Apr 19, 2014 4:46 am, edited 2 times in total.

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Re: Ivy [short KN] [beta]

#2 Post by SelLi » Sat Apr 19, 2014 1:43 am

I tried to download it for Windows but a menu popped up with 2 choices and since I don't know French I don't know what to do to download it. :(

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Re: Ivy [short KN] [beta]

#3 Post by korova » Sat Apr 19, 2014 4:47 am

OK, I put the files directly on the forum as attachments, so you now have new download links in the first post.

Enjoy !

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Re: Ivy [short KN] [beta]

#4 Post by alberte » Mon May 19, 2014 6:29 pm

I really enjoyed this!
It was different and intresting.
One spelling mistake in the ENG translation would be in the beginning it says "ans" when it should be "and"

this is an intresting way to make a story.

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Re: Ivy [short KN] [beta]

#5 Post by korova » Wed May 21, 2014 1:34 pm

Thanks for your insight.

I'll look into the mispelling.

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