1-The story is simple, yet seems to be fun at the same time. It's like this game is a relaxing story for the player. As for the characters' I like them. They all have pretty good personalities, and will keep the story going.
2-Maybe just try and branch out of the box a bit with the personalities. A few of the girls may be a bit too nice, but that's not a bad thing.
3-System seems fine for me.
4-You could try eating one and then describe it, or if you wanna an example maybe this (though it may not be that good lol) "Mom really didn't know had to keep fresh food. The bread was stale, and crunched in my mouth with every bit. Though I tried to ignore it, I could help but taste how dry and bland the turkey was. If I didn't have a strong stomach, I defiantly would have thrown up" Hope this helps a bit.
5-Yeah. It looks like a cute cafe
6-I'm just confused about the dating style. So you play the game and get one girls path to play through, then do it again to get another. If that is how it is, does the girl we are own have a good and bad end?
