Age of Dawn
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Age of Dawn
This is other game that will finish.
Age of Dawn
Mark woke suddenly from his slumber. He found himself in the middle of a battle field. He sees a pile of human body’s next to the trench. He runs towards it and heard gun fire in the background. It was midday and the sun stand tall over the field. The heat was horrible and dreadful. In the pile of bodies a hand stick out and starts to move around. Mark stares at the hand while gun fire sounds cover the background. While he takes cover over the bodies some gun almost shot his feet. Mark thought to himself while trying to figure who is shooting at him. “Where am I and why am I here?” He thought as a small voice mutter something under the pile. The small voice began to sound louder as some bodies fell to the ground. Soon the voice begins to loud enough to hear. The voice said “Help me! I am trap in the pile and my arm is wounded.” Mark thought it was a trick from another kid. He begins to walk away from it. Soon some more bodies fell to reveal a head and an arm. Mark stood there shock to see it. It took him a minute to snap out of it. Sniper lights were search around the field for something. Mark takes cover next to remaining pile of bodies and after the light were gone and the sound of gun fire stopped. Mark took a break for second to think about what just happen. It took a while to think about it but he knows what he has to do and it was time to act. He must decide now and fast before the snipers come back. Cold sweat drip down his neck while making the decision. The forest was quiet and only birds can be heard. Mark decides to…
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Age of Dawn
Mark woke suddenly from his slumber. He found himself in the middle of a battle field. He sees a pile of human body’s next to the trench. He runs towards it and heard gun fire in the background. It was midday and the sun stand tall over the field. The heat was horrible and dreadful. In the pile of bodies a hand stick out and starts to move around. Mark stares at the hand while gun fire sounds cover the background. While he takes cover over the bodies some gun almost shot his feet. Mark thought to himself while trying to figure who is shooting at him. “Where am I and why am I here?” He thought as a small voice mutter something under the pile. The small voice began to sound louder as some bodies fell to the ground. Soon the voice begins to loud enough to hear. The voice said “Help me! I am trap in the pile and my arm is wounded.” Mark thought it was a trick from another kid. He begins to walk away from it. Soon some more bodies fell to reveal a head and an arm. Mark stood there shock to see it. It took him a minute to snap out of it. Sniper lights were search around the field for something. Mark takes cover next to remaining pile of bodies and after the light were gone and the sound of gun fire stopped. Mark took a break for second to think about what just happen. It took a while to think about it but he knows what he has to do and it was time to act. He must decide now and fast before the snipers come back. Cold sweat drip down his neck while making the decision. The forest was quiet and only birds can be heard. Mark decides to…
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Re: Teenage High
Hmmmmmmm based on the premise, you might want to either flesh it out a bit, or give some other ideas as to what's going to happen. As I see it right now, it's too vague. The idea of a main character in HS, thinking *anything can happen*...I've seen that premise a lot. So long as you have a definite idea of what's happening, it's OK
Just remember that the premise that you have is a bit on the standard side...
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Re: Teenage High
I do have some ideas for it. Can't reviel they yet. That was a bummer! It on the standard side
That crush my other plans... Anyways
The main objective is get through high school and build up your own skills.
There will be career that you pick somewhere in the game.
That crush my other plans... Anyways
The main objective is get through high school and build up your own skills.
There will be career that you pick somewhere in the game.
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Re: Teenage High
Sound like a good concept, would charater creation and customization be involved?
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as of right now not yet. I think it will later.
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Sorry for double posting. 
I have updated the story and it on the first post.
still working on this projects.
I have updated the story and it on the first post.
still working on this projects.
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Re: Teenage High
Zatch wrote:The main objective is get through high school and build up your own skills.
Yeah, high school life is kinda dangerous these days. Oh, where have thou art gone, good old high school days?Zatch wrote:He sees a pile of human body’s next to the trench. He runs towards it and heard gun fire in the background
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It's not about high school life anymore.
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Yeah I know but I just can't resist the urge to make a silly joke out of it. Sorry if you are offended by it.
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you didn't offend me in any other way.
working on some of plot lines.
working on some of plot lines.
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Re: X Wars
Double Post!
I got an update for X Wars.
Here is picture of alice.

Drawn by shiisuke
I got an update for X Wars.
Here is picture of alice.

Drawn by shiisuke
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Re: X Wars
Terribly cute 
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Re: X Wars
it's shiny, soft and lovely <3~
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Very cute! 
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Beautiful artwork.
Now who's Alice supposed to be?
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