hello~ we've meet on facebook, and here i promise you to answer this question
1. Which character stands out the most for you? Why?
by the art, I love Reksa, his face and tatoo and any detail you draw looks beautiful
but by the traits, I've got my eyes on Yuda, I simply imagine how that foul-mouthed guy got tamed then blushing here and there. It's a pity he's already got Asih as his wife tho~ (i want to date himmmm) XD
2. Does the intro and the art so far interesting?
The Intro tell me the main theme, but I still dont get the main problem of this story yet. I love your idea using Indonesian-culture on this, just be careful dont confuse people where the fiction content and the real indonesian culture since you combine so many culture on one story (Im working on this problem too
) and yes I love your idea to make an encyclopedia (be sure to make it interesting somehow :3 )!
About the art, I think it's polished enough, good proportion on character and yes THEY ARE HANDSOME! <3 (I still dont know how you combine background, interface and character, so I dont talk about it right now). What catch my eyes is your color mood around red-yellow-brown. I dont know If anyone notice this but any "Indonesian-themed" product (game, animation, anything) mostly use this color mood, just make sure you dont make the color too dark and shady since you wanted to make a romance and comedy story, this is otome game right? IMHO try to search what kind of color a girl love
3. What makes you consider to play this game?
the content of course, Im Indonesian and I think it's nice to see how you combine our culture with fantasy theme. and... uhm... hot guys you make of course *cough*
4. Last but not least, do you have any question or critiques? I welcome constructive criticism any time Maybe you can see something that I miss or lacking.
since I dont know your plan on story, I want to know how big Tamara portion on the story? personally, I just dont want to see any heroine who can do nothing than being helped by a bunch of hot guy.
I hope I dont be rude on you. Tell me if any of my comment offend you, ok? Well then, keep up the good work! I love your works, May the force be with you.