I made this topic to get some opinions about my art ^^' I want to be able to do drawings that interesting to be put in a vn, but the problem that I have right now is that I find my art plain boring.. so I am trying to get better here by practicing it and stuff
This is something I did recently, I tried to do a new coloring style which I found more fun, faster and less painful.... somewhat lol but I am satisfied enough with it~
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If you haven't already, you could go out and imitate and experiment with other artists' styles. It's pretty fun, and it helps a lot with the view of "my art looks boring!"
Ohh great idea Choco! but I am sorta still afraid of doing this actually ^^' is a chicken do you have any examples of your own work that you still keeping somewhere maybe it will be a great cure and insperation for me QuQchocojax wrote:If you haven't already, you could go out and imitate and experiment with other artists' styles. It's pretty fun, and it helps a lot with the view of "my art looks boring!"
chocojax wrote:The coloring looks nice, yo! The colors (mainly the skin) look like they don't really have much of an effect on the other parts, so maybe you could try to mess around with that more.
Thank you very much! XD errr.....I am not sure I get what you meant with the colors doesn't have an effect on the other parts......can you do a color over or give an example if that was ok I WILL THANK YOU FOREVER!!
Anyways, here is another something I did recently, still practicing coloring, colors, values and simple perspective o.o still not really glad with the eyes coloring TT.TT
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Sapphi wrote:The coloring is beautiful, especially the hair. But I think you should either make the large light shines in the eyes brighter (more opaque). Right now I'm getting a bug eye vibe, or an "is this a corpse?" vibe. Either way I feel like the technique makes their eyes look glazed over which makes them look the opposite of lively and happy. If you are going for creepy, you're bang on. If not I would change it.
Oh i get what you mean XD; i have a better eye coloring style now than this corpse one lol thank you for telling me your opinion honestly~ X] creepy stuff is always awesome too~~
Morhighan wrote:Wow, I love how vivid your colors are! o:
Keep up the great work!
Hehe thanks~ Lol
Haha pet hair?! Lol i appreciate your words you are very nice ^u^* i tryed to color like the pros that are everywhere~ lolFoxTrotMuffin wrote:Oh goodness, these are beautiful! I especially love the shading on the hair and the super bright colors. Your art is not boring; it has so much "pop!" to it! I just want to pet all that lovely fluffy hair...
You gotta try chibis~ i would like to see them when you do!Erotome wrote:Your art isn't boring - The style is adorable and the colouring is just spot-on (never been able to do chibi or colour so envious here); they all like like cute little dolls.
Awwwww thaaaaaank you! Q0Q i will keep making more but after i am finished with some very delayed artworks and other things ^^'revengineer wrote:Totally adorable for sure! I get tired with my own style, we all do - but this is something that is VERY marketable for a VN or any kind of game art. Please keep making more!
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There is considerable improvement in your chibis. As for how you could improve them... you could maybe make the shines in their eyes brighter and making their faces more round? It could be chalked down to stylistic choice, though. It's not really that important.
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