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I like the crazy direction the story takes when the ship's "body" appears.
There are already some funny sentences in this demo, and the idea of the ship transfering his IA in robots (or whatever) is good.

The art : I think Yohan's friends look fine, Yang looks very good, but Yohan himself and the alien are a little less ... lively, the drawing seems more akward.
Maybe they were drawn first ?

The story : some passages deserve more description on what Yohann sees, feels and thinks :
- when the UFO lands, because it's a mysterious moment and should be emphasized.
- when the UFO uses its camouflage, same reason
- when the alien glows in the dark, it's beautiful and gives a direction to the story (the alien is pure in contradiction to the rotten city Yohann lives in.)

And more important : Yohann should ask himself what the heck this alien is doing here, why did he come ???
I guess it will be explained later, but it's strange that Yohan doesn't seem to care about this mystery.

Sorry about the Japanese - I know it doesn't fit. It's just placeholder art for now and I hope to get some Korean BGs done once I can afford an artist!

Yohan and the alien are made from a sprite creator, so they're just also temporary. It's mostly all placeholder art.. I'm hoping to find better art for Yohan and the alien soon or be able to hire an artist.

Thanks for your insight on the ship scene. I think you're right on the emotional end of it, so I'll definitely see if I can add that emphasis you're talking about!