The story itself is interesting and the characters feel like they are real people/non-people. There appears to be no bigger story yet other than the lives of these two living under Adeline's house, but it does feel like there's going to be a bigger picture.
The art is mediocre but well made. The characters blend in naturally with the background, but I expect better art after the whole game is finished. So I'm merely commenting on the initial art. The facial expressions feel significant and real.
The UI is needlessly large. The default size of the text area is sufficient IMO. Also, if you're using a bright colored text area, you should use dark colored text. It was a little hard to read, and a little bit of an eyesore.
I notice there are some glitches with Hisao on the fight scene. You are attempting to change his facial expression using a transition but he ends up disappearing and turning into something else. Are you using the 'with dissolve' transition?
The fight scene needs sound effects. It felt very anti-climactic for a fight scene. I would also say that a little bit more movement would be nice for the first two goons at least.
I feel like there are unnecessary stops in the music. Maybe that's just me. But I feel as if there's no need to stop the music where you stopped them, or just find music more suited to the background. Speaking of the music, I like your choices.
Also, Hisao kinda sorta reminded me of someone... an esper... with white hair... wearing line pattern clothing...
hmmm...
hahaha. but don't worry about it.
The game shows a lot of promise, but from what I'm seeing, 11% doesn't describe it. The game and story has potential to be quite lengthy and elaborate.
I'll be looking forward to future game updates.
