NAOMI is a story about a young woman coming to grips with herself in a world hostile to her existence.
Download NAOMI 1.1 Here!
Completed Game Thread
Writing: 100%
Character Designs: 100%
Sprites: 100%
GUI: 100%
Programming: 100%
What am I hoping to get out of this thread?
I'm hoping for feedback on whether people feel Naomi is portrayed appropriately or not. I'm not trans so I do not have any first hand experience with BEING trans. At the time of posting this, I have roughly seven days to complete this game for #JamForLeelah (I started about a week ago), but I would really appreciate any feedback that can be given about the interface, and when I have a build done, any feedback that can be given on THAT (storywise, etc). I've been a writer for a long time, and I've had a long term VN project I've been working on, but this will be the first VN that will be successfully put together and posted for download. I'm excited, but I know I have a lot to learn still so I'm a bit nervous!
So: Based on the minimal screencaps I've presented, is the text readable? Is anything too bright/too dark?
I hope to have a download up within a couple of days.
Credits
Story Editing courtesy of Kylock!
CG Gallery Code from Leon
Backgrounds from Auro-Cyanide
Base GUI from Luce Jumble/Aurehan
Art by Tomo+
Screenshots
Code: Select all
Ren'Py 6.18.3.761 lint report, generated at: Thu Feb 12 20:33:22 2015
Statistics:
The game contains 184 dialogue blocks, containing 2,883 words and 15,447
characters, for an average of 15.7 words and 84 characters per block.
The game contains 0 menus, 11 images, and 15 screens.
Is that a long enough thread title for you? I think I covered everything, haha!