Space Case (Comedy, Romance, Sci-Fi) - First Project

[LunarVN]

*Forgot to add a little content warning! There's some strong language here.

Hey everyone. I just finished putting together my first visual novel. I made it as a means to learn the basics of Ren'Py... the very basics.

It's extremely short and the dialogue was written as I went along. But hopefully it's somewhat enjoyable (even if it's in a "laughably bad" kinda way).

I'd love to get some feedback or suggestions for the future. I'm always looking to improve. I'm sure there are some incredibly obvious things I missed in the coding!

Also, I still haven't figured out how to add some nice credits to the end of the game yet. I put the credits on a notepad in the download folder. I'll put them here as well, just in case. I really appreciate the art that was made available for this little beginner's project! I promise I'll learn how to put together some proper credits next!

Sorry if this isn't the correct area for this topic... it's technically a completed game... but it's still my first one.

Download - https://www.mediafire.com/?wyu5ha71haiyys2

Credits -

Made with the Ren'Py visual novel engine!

Art Assets -

http://ppppantsu.blogspot.com/

KONETT'S RESOURCES - http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 52&t=28840

Antiskill - http://antiskill.newgrounds.com/

gugo78 - http://gugo78.newgrounds.com/



Music, Writing, and Production by Dillon Taylor.

[laylee96]

Does the download include the mac version? Also, you may want to upload some pictures, just to show others what the game looks like.

[philip]

Pretty good for a first attempt! Art is nice, not full of typos - It's just TOO DARNED SHORT!! Hope that you will expand on this, or make a longer game; you have proved that you can do it. Onward and upward!!! (How's that for encouragement?)

philip

[LunarVN]

Pretty good for a first attempt! Art is nice, not full of typos - It's just TOO DARNED SHORT!! Hope that you will expand on this, or make a longer game; you have proved that you can do it. Onward and upward!!! (How's that for encouragement?)

philip

Haha, thanks for the words of encouragement! This was mainly just to see if I could get the basics down. Branching paths, labeling everything correctly, and even just the transitions. I'm already working on a new project though. It'll be much larger than this one and hopefully of a higher quality as well! =P

[philip]

@ lunarVN-

I apologize for my poor choice of words in my first response; "pretty good job . . ." is an understatement! "Excellent" and "wonderful" are much more appropriate. I will look forward to your future efforts!

philip