Three Souls [Flash][Horror][NaNoRenO 2015]

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Three Souls [Flash][Horror][NaNoRenO 2015]

#1 Post by Cera L. Hendry » Thu Mar 05, 2015 3:38 am

Three Souls

Format: Flash-based visual novel w/ point & click movement.
Genre: Horror.

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Completed Part 1 for Nanoreno2015!!
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Basic synopsis:
Myrah met 'Abby' Abigail on the first day she transferred to Saint Angela's all-girls senior college. Abby was all Myrah could have asked for in a new friend, she was good company, helpful and highly knowledgeable of the school. This went without saying though, as Abby had been there for a very very long time indeed.

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A linear flash-based visual novel with simple point and click style gameplay. Search for objects in a strange parallel world and bring them to three girls whom Abby wishes to exact revenge upon.

Goals:
Have some form of simple Flash VN completed by March 31st.

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This is my first time doing a Nanoreno, and I'll be working on the project alone. I know it's technically not a Visual Novel in the strictest sense, but I do want a heavy emphasis on atmosphere and character interaction. I also wish to stress that this is a highly experimental project, and although I have built something similar many many years ago, I haven't actually touched much actionscript since then. O_o I'm hoping I can pull through with something simple at the very least. To speed the process up artistically, I will be creating the backgrounds and environment using DAZ 3D studio kits which I construct and render out to piece together in photoshop and flash. I will be creating everything else though. *Deep breath* Here goes…

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Re: Three Souls [Flash][Horror][NaNoRenO 2015]

#2 Post by Guest » Thu Mar 05, 2015 9:29 am

I'll definitely be looking forward to this. Best of luck.

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#3 Post by Rossfellow » Thu Mar 05, 2015 9:30 am

Guest wrote:I'll definitely be looking forward to this. Best of luck.
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#4 Post by Haze » Thu Mar 05, 2015 9:42 am

Rossfellow wrote:
Guest wrote:I'll definitely be looking forward to this. Best of luck.
^---Ah, that was me. I didnt realize the forums lets you post without logging in. :lol:
I did the exact same thing just the other day! :lol:

Anyway, this looks like it'll be interesting, especially because the contrast between the two pictures is just plain creepy. Although I wonder, why did the school reopen the classroom after not using it for so long...?
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#5 Post by Auro-Cyanide » Thu Mar 05, 2015 9:47 pm

I'm already getting a sense of the atmosphere from the screenshots *shiver*

Good luck with finishing it! I'm looking forward to it and I don't even like horror games XD

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#6 Post by Mad Harlequin » Thu Mar 05, 2015 10:02 pm

That vacant stare is frightening. :lol:

One note: it's "exact revenge."

Anyway, I'm excited to see how you handle horror, Cera! Good luck!
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#7 Post by CrimsonMoon » Tue Mar 10, 2015 2:30 am

This is intriguing, scared the heck outta me from the twisted looking sprites, lol. Good luck with the project, I'll be looking forward to this. :D
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#8 Post by YossarianIII » Tue Mar 10, 2015 5:06 pm

Those eyes on the second sprite :shock:

I like the contrast between the sprites and the backgrounds. It's a cool aesthetic.

Best of luck on the project!

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#9 Post by Cera L. Hendry » Wed Mar 25, 2015 11:11 pm

I've been pretty neglectful with updates! XD Mainly because I was worried that my idea was a bit too ambitious with my limited actionscript skills and didn't want to generate too much expectation. I'm getting more confident now, although I don't think I'm going to complete the whole game by the 31st but I will have a decent segment to showcase on the day (and all the assets in place.) So the rest won't be far behind. As a VN mixed with a very simple point & click 'stills' interface, this was always going to be a very experimental submission.

On another note, I'd like to know if the screenshot of the dark corridor is too dark for some monitors. I still need for it to be a dark, but seeable. Or perhaps I'll have the character hold a 'flashlight' and change the visuals to have that kind of effect.
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#10 Post by Hazel-Bun » Wed Mar 25, 2015 11:17 pm

Awesome!

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#11 Post by CrimsonMoon » Thu Mar 26, 2015 4:56 am

The BG looks dark, but not too dark. I can actually still see details. :D
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#12 Post by Harliqueen » Thu Mar 26, 2015 6:48 am

I absolutely love the character art in this. That look really adds to the eerie feel that the story sounds like it will have :)
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#13 Post by AntiquedFae » Thu Mar 26, 2015 2:23 pm

This looks amazing. The style is...ahh! So subtly powerful. I'm definitely looking forward to this. I love point and click adventure games. Oh, one question: jump scares? Yay or nay?
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#14 Post by Cera L. Hendry » Tue Mar 31, 2015 6:01 am

I'm just going to leave this link here… and get an early night.
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#15 Post by Mad Harlequin » Tue Mar 31, 2015 3:11 pm

Well, I played through the chapter, and I can't wait to see more! I still noticed a few grammatical and mechanical errors, but you can easily clean them up for a future release.

Where is the story set, by the way? I'm getting the feeling that it's in England (especially considering the reference made to WWII), but I don't want to make assumptions.

One other thing I noticed when navigating the school is that all of the classroom doors in one view are stated to be for room 1-C, but I know that's not true . . .

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