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Kyra ia a 29 year old woman who's still not married and is not interested in romance. She doesn't think it's important as of now. But her mother is insistent in getting her married. How will she cope? Will she be able to find the one? Or will she stay single again for another year?

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Features:

- 30+k words
- 3 romancable characters
- 6 endings (good and bad ending for each character)
- Original sprites and art
- Some original music
- Full credits in .txt

Download Here:

EDIT:
Version 1.2 uploaded (for all platforms), which should fix the images not appearing.

Dropbox:
All Platform (101MB)

Mediafire:
All Platform (101MB)

itch.io:
All Platform (101MB)

Guide:

Hello, this is my first official released game. It's supposed to be a NaNoReNo '15 entry, but as you can see, it's a very late NaNoReNo '15, so I'm wondering if we can still call it that, hence I don't put NaNo tag on the subject title. :'D It's a pretty straightforward game since it's meant to be lighthearted. Our team (Mashiro-Chi, Meyismyname, octacon100) and I hope you'll enjoy our short VN.

Any feedback/suggestions/constructive criticisms are greatly appreciated! Also, let me know if you encounter any bugs/glitches. It's still not tested for Mac and Linux, since I'm only using Windows.

Questions:

- What do you think of the characters? Who do you like the most?
- What ending did you get the first time?
- What do you like and dislike about the VN (story, characters, music, sound effect, etc)?
- Any suggestions for improvement?

This is really adorable! The art is really nice and all the bachelors were super handsome! Ezven is my favorite, since I have a soft spot for glasses guys as well haha~ I also think his route is particularly the sweetest!

As for Adair... I think it's pretty obvious he's a guy, considering that this is a strictly GxB VN OTL Even so, I liked his route and his bubbly personality!

Bastian was a good contrast to Adair, and like the others, I liked his route. I just think that the dialogues with Austin there are a bit too random and callous.

When rough boy wants to save me, I´m all his The martial arts occured to me before he mentioned them but I didn´t see the bully comming.

I thought "she" is "him". But after his change into the boy, I still saw him as a very girly boy and I even didn´t want to ended up with him. Also his personality was too much happy for my taste

I see a girl in him, I can´t help myself

as I realized, I would end up with the boy-girl, I stopped and tried to play it again with another choices

that while MC was with Bastian, she thought a lot about Austin (almost all the time from the beginning). Bastian walked her home and she didn´t think what she could say or why he helped her etc. She was thinking about her ex-boyfriend. It was a little weird in my opinion.

Thank you for the comment regarding Austin, I'll try to improve my writing in my next game. But I capture Austin's character as someone that we can despise, no? :'D

I can understand, so don't worry. But I hope you'll change your mind about Adair and Evzen after you see their endings. :'D And thank you, I'll keep in mind what you just said about Kyra's thoughts. I'm not sure more Bastians will be possible at this point, but I'm glad people like him. xD

Yes, you definitely captured his character as someone to be totally despised. ;___; I'm kinda disappointed Bastian didn't beat the crap outta that scum (ONE PUNCH IS NOT ENOUGH OH MY GOD THAT %^&$!). XD

- What do you think of the characters? Who do you like the most?
They're cool! I can't really tell whom I like the most, personality-wise, but I really like Evzen's route because it's so realistic! Well, I kinda found out about Adair since the first time I saw him, and I was like waiting for him to reveal his true identity LOL.

- What ending did you get the first time?
Evzen's bad ending LOL I tend to go with the flow, I guess?

- What do you like and dislike about the VN (story, characters, music, sound effect, etc)?
I really like the art! Though in my opinion the MC looks too young as a 29-year-old woman LOL The guys are so handsomely drawn and Maya is so cute~~ To be honest, I wasn't really paying attention to the music (I'm so sorry!!) but at some points I noticed the musics really fit the situations, like when the MC was angered when Austin approached her.

For the parts I dislike... I don't know, but I guess the part where Bastian suddenly hugged the MC and comforted her was kinda, you know, silly, if I may say. I'd accept if Bastian knew her first-hand (like in Evzen's case), but why would a stranger suddenly embrace someone like that? If I were the MC, I would definitely ask him what he had in his mind at that time, but that's just me.

- Any suggestions for improvement?
Probably the part I mentioned in the question before. But overall, you guys did a really good job! It's actually really nice as a first game. If you're making the next one, I'm sure it'll be super awesome!

Lol, I won't be sorry if Bastian beat him though. xD

I didn't explain Bastian very well. To think back, there are some parts that I left out from the outline of the story. *hahanervouslaughhaha* I set a goal for the VN to be around 20-30k words. I wrote around ~10k+ for each route, so I don't want the VN to seem unbalanced in terms of the routes. Hence I didn't get to explain why Bastian hugged her. But oh well, the deed is done. xD I'll keep in mind about this though for my next game, as it is strange for stranger to hug another stranger. ^^; Thank you very much for pointing it out, and I'm in the middle of writing a game, so I hope it goes well.