Alter Ego [Mystery/Action] Demo

[final513]

Hey guys, I finished my demo of Alter Ego and wanted some critique! I posted this here, check it out if you want some information: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 94#p389094

Screenshots

Just a warning: There is no art (for now)

I strongly urge you to replay the game at least once, just to see the different dialogue.

Here's some questions for you:

1. Did you notice that the color of the font represents their hair color? If not, how can I let the player know about this better?

2. How did you feel about the characters and personalities? Any favorites or unlikable characters?

3. How did you feel about the subject matter (alter ego's, personal battle, moving on, etc.)?

4. Did you replay the demo? If so, did you feel the different dialogue meant something to you?

5. How did you like the exploration? Was there enough incentive to want to explore? On that note, did you feel I did enough to describe the areas?

6. How did you like the plot twist at the end?

7. How do you feel about the future of Alter Ego, in terms of story and characters?

Links

Windows: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzUFwv ... UzRWc/view

Mac: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzUFwv ... tlY00/view

Linux: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzUFwv ... 94VEU/view

Thanks for your time! Hope you enjoyed it!

[BornSecular]

I tried to access the download for Mac, but it appears the Google Drive permissions do not allow access. Is it set to allow anyone with the link to view/download?

ETA: The Windows link does work.

[final513]

Thanks for the tip, should be working now.