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SATISFACTION
Oh. My. God.
Thank you for nice feedback around the forum!
And now I'm charged to finish this VN once more!
Jo was late for school due to his medication. Luckily, his best friend, Andrew, was also late.
As an exchange of minus point, they would join a competition attended by a famous school in the city, which will held 1 month and a week after. Logically, they will get ten times their minus point, so, this opportunity shouldn't be a waste.
During 5 weeks, would they be prepared for the competition with so many obstacles facing them?
Oh, wait a minute. Prepared? Do they really have time for that?
WARNING: This game will contain
And let me present to you...
CHARACTERS
(old concept)
Joshua Geraldyn Geovanni
Main POV - Dec 16 - Male
I present, a typical international student which is American-Japanese! For some reason he doesn't attend school in either America or Japan, but in Indonesia! However, he's not a part of clichés in Japanese characters, where he will say<insert Japanese phrase here>!
This student who prefers to be called 'Jo' instead of 'Josh' suffers from Chronic Fatigue Syndrome, where someone feels abnormal fatigue and problems more than normal people. During his schooltime, he was strictly protected and supervised under his brother, Lloyd. Although physically weak, he's mentally strong, provided from his environment. He is the best friend of Sammy and Andrew, under their own name 'SJA'. He is the nicest and physically weakest from them three.
In this VN, he may or may not be Andrew's 'one step forward'. That, if you know what I mean.
Andrew Hartanto Lim
Nov 4 - Male
One hell of a nerd! The one who always got A+s in class. He prefers spending his time in library than wasting his time doing sports. When it comes to read, just. You won't want to disturb his thing. A Chinese Indonesian. He looks really cold and cruel outside, but he's actually a sweet pie inside. A tsundere towards Sammy and really caring in front of Jo.
In this VN, he may or may not be Jo's 'one step forward', depending on the player.
(He looks like a man in here for some reason- might be uploading another concept later)
Sammy Tjiu
Oct 12 - Male
The thug in the VN.
You will either hate him or love him once you see him. He's an Indonesian who has a collection of swear words in his mind. He is one kind of a pervert, yet feeling that he's 'fabulous', 'awesome', and all those stuffs while he always got the lowest grade and rank at school. However, when it comes to stamina, no one could beat him, especially when it comes to basketball and sprint. He has a dark backstory, thus making him today. He's a bisexual, and attracted to both Jo and Andrew despite being his best friends.
(And no, only some Indonesian people have a bad attitude like him. That's what I know so far.)
Though having minor role... you'll find out the secret why I mark him as a main character as well~
Lloyd Geovanni
May 31 - Male
NPC which has no sprites. Runs Fisherkron Company, a big multilateral company working on the management and infrastructure of building. He's Jo's father-like brother. Despite being the eldest, he can't spend his time too much on his siblings, but still works his best to do whatever he can in order to help his only brother. He also has big asset, thus making him able to hire butlers and maids for his own family.
FEATURES
(which is still planned, of course)
- This VN. IS FREEEEEE!!!
- Your choice really matters for the future of your ending.
- Mature Filter.Because, why did I warn about RAPE and shotacon in the first place?
- Free Indonesian language study by Andrew!
- Free swear language study by Sammy!
- Gallery Room!
- Music Room!
- Free Mode, where player will be involved in random events after getting the endings.
- Exclusive otome with SJA! You can choose which boy to play with!
PROGRESS
To summarize:
PLOT : 85%~90%
ART :
- CG -> 2/?? (concept), 0/?? (complete)
- BG -> 2/?? (concept), 0/?? (complete)
- GUI -> 0/??
SCRIPT : ~15%
QUESTIONS
1. What do you think about the plot?
2. Which character appeals to you the most? And why?
3. Which pairing do you feel fit the most? And why? It's not just limited to canon pairing (which is Jo x Andrew/Andrew x Jo)!
4. I am approaching a different level of activating the mature filter and triggering an unchangeable ending by asking some questions at the beginning of the VN. Still, the mature filter adjustment will be available. Do you think it's okay?
5. I would like to hear more comments, feedback, and critiques from you!
Dec 26,2015 --------------------------------------------- character's concepts uploaded
Dec 25,2015 --------------------------------------------- update of Andrew's character description
Dec 22,2015 --------------------------------------------- massive plot change, set deadline, new questions, thread unlocked
Dec 08, 2015 --------------------------------------------- thread first created?