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Looking for proofreaders

#1 Post by infel » Tue Jan 19, 2016 6:39 pm

I'm looking for a few proofreaders for my yuri game 'Black Dale: The Scarlet Witch. I'm currently wanting about four to six people. What I need is your honest opinion on the writing, characters, and events in the story. The first two chapter aren't filled with action, but hopefully convey the characters well. If you're interested you can leave me a comment or send me a message =). For more info on the game you can go here https://lunarwingames.wordpress.com/bla ... tasydrama/. Due note that the word count is 28,000. It's pretty big, but I want a good demo. Also the format it's done in may look a bit weird, but it should be easy to read. Anyway, thanks again.
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Re: Looking for proofreaders

#2 Post by Seigetsu » Tue Jan 19, 2016 7:53 pm

I'd be interested. Specifically, what kind of feedback are you looking for? Do you want your proofreaders to nitpick spelling and grammatical errors? Or are you looking for a more general response? I find that in the case where you want proofreaders to nitpick and directly edit the work, a program that tracks changes (like MS Word) would be more useful, because you can easily go back and revert changes if you don't like them. Just a suggestion.

Oh, and do you have a deadline for when you want the proofreading to be done?

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#3 Post by Nelico » Fri Jan 22, 2016 5:58 pm

I'd be interested. I'm as good at finding spelling errors as I'm bad at finding grammar errors (The curse of reading japanese VNs with MTs^^" )

But if you want feedback on writing and characters I might be able to help as a fellow writer. Especially since you seem to have fantasy elements(?)

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Re: Looking for proofreaders

#4 Post by Writingprobably » Sat Jan 23, 2016 9:41 pm

I'd be interesting in proofreading, if you're still looking for people.

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#5 Post by infel » Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:39 pm

Sorry for not getting back to your three DX. Been a bit busy. I'm sending you guys an email now though on your questions and such. Thanks again
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Re: Looking for proofreaders

#6 Post by infel » Sat Jan 30, 2016 9:43 pm

Writingprobably wrote:I'd be interesting in proofreading, if you're still looking for people.

Hey, I'm still looking for others if you're free. Ps- sorry for the late reply =(
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Re: Looking for proofreaders

#7 Post by Writingprobably » Sun Jan 31, 2016 4:20 am

Sure. Just send me a link.

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Re: Looking for proofreaders

#8 Post by Amecha » Sun Jan 31, 2016 6:04 am

I could proofread. I'm decently good at noticing awkward writing, phrasing, dialogue, spelling errors and grammar mistakes.

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