Sailorel wrote:
i was just wondering if that sounds like a good story for a visual novel...
Any story can be written as a visual novel. What exactly makes a story good? I don't know. However, I am reminded of two phrases:
* "A character wants something badly..." This phrase shows up in
TVTropes' article about writing a story and Ian Irvine's article
55 Ways to Create Compelling Characters. Make sure that your fictional characters have specific goal, and that they will need to struggle in order to achieve the goals.
* "The human heart in conflict with itself..." This was
said by William Faulkner decades ago. It seems like a useful quote to keep in mind when thinking about characters, their goals, their concerns, and so on.
Your story seems to have at least two conflicts: 1) Main character trying to determine who she will be. 2) A love triangle, in which the main character is trying to choose which person she loves. Both of these can be a good foundation for a story.
Sailorel wrote:
if a good number of people think it's a good idea, then i will release a demo
Don't write with the goal of getting feedback. Some people will read the forum topic and won't know what to say. Other people will read your story and not have any comments to offer. Others won't be interested. That said... write because you want to create a story.
