The Dreamweaver [NaNo16] [Completed!]

[RumRat]

The background looks really cool! Mystical is definitely a good word for it. uvu
More of the purple light/shadow on the pillars could help to unite everything.

Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
I thought so as well, the pillars really stand out from the rest, but I got a bit annoyed working on that background so I'm currently working on the next bg and sprites lineart and will go back to it later. XP

[RumRat]

Updated first post with some work on the Dreamweavers sprite.

[Lesleigh63]

1. Would you be interested in playing a kinetic vn collection of short, odd, fantasy stories?
Yes.

2. It's my first time drawing a background, tell me the truth, how awful is it? :")
It's looking quite good (I probably would have fazed out the edges of the smoke/mist. Love your animation.

3. General opinions on the art?
Like your dreamweaver sprite.

4. Would you be more interested in the VN if it was not kinetic?
I don't have a problem with kinetic VNs.

[Weenily]

I love the dreamweaver's hair! Your style is so cool tbh. Also the animations on the background look cool! I think the animations should be toned down a little if it's going to be looping in the BG though?

[RumRat]

Updated first post with some work on Kali's sprites.

Lesleigh63- Thanks for the feedback!

Weenily- Thank you, and yes, the animation seems a bit distracting at this pace, nothing is definite yet though, I'll see on how to go about it once I get to the actual coding bit.

[Candy☆Giants]

The watercolor aesthetic is really pretty. I, for one, am excited for such a lovely KN! No need for choices when all I wanna do is appreciate the story/art.

[RumRat]

I often can't sleep, so I opened 'paint' at 3 am and scribbled this
what am i doing with my life :"D




Oh and, Candy☆Giants- Thanks

[Weenily]

Good luck with the coding! ALSO OMFG THAT SCRIBBL E I LOVE IT POOR DREAMWEAVER. "Stay away from her Kali...she looks like one of those...ah-knee-may cosplayers"

[RumRat]

Weenily- Ahaha, 'ah-knee-may', I can't, beautiful. Thank you :"D


Feedback on the font anyone? Too small, too curvy?

[RumRat]

Right, okay, I haven't updated in forever. Ran into a bit of a trouble with a pesky pc virus, and was generally way too busy this month, but even though I have to shorten the story and make this an about 10mins cute read, I'm stubbornly going to try and finish it in time! (wish me luck)

it's my own fault for making my first VN a NaNo solo, I guess. :"D

I made a few frames of blinking and sparkle and mist animation for the sprites and bg's so at least you get to look at shiny pictures? :")

[Ghost of Crux]

OH WOW. Such gorgeous previews. I absolutely love the art style, and the animated ambiance looks so pretty...

[RumRat]

Thanx for all the comments guys, it didn't turn out quite as I hoped, but I managed to finish it, nontheless, which is an achievement on it's own.

Completed game thread: http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 11&t=37860

[Ghost of Crux]

OKAY, THE FACT THAT YOU FINISHED YOUR FIRST VN IS ALREADY AMAZING SO CONGRATULATIONS!
HERE HAVE BROWNIES. No weed I swear.

OFF TO DOWNLOAD.

[Lesleigh63]

Hey, congrats on finishing.

[Nylan]

Congrats! More motivation to finish my own foolhardy project. You did a good job with the atmosphere on this one.