Summary:
Luca was born in the a small village that resides In the outer borders of the great kingdom of Valoria,
it was a quiet and peaceful village that seemed to exist outside of the rest of the world
visitors where rare and often looked at with suspicion.
Yet your Twin sister Sofia and you were brought up in a kind and loving home with people that dotted on you both.
it was only as you grew older that you began to see how the Elders and others in the village always treated Sofia and yourself different than the other kids, you were not permitted to play games with them, nor did you have to help out with the fields and livestock.
It was unusual for the Elder to even permit yous to leave his home, your days were spent learning to write, read, swordsplay and the delicate art of magic.
Sofia and you believed it wasn’t a bad life just lonely but at least you had each other.
That all changed the week of your 18th birthday, when an emissary of the High King of Valoria showed up at the Elders home, seeking Azazel's the great dragons sacrifice.
As Twins It was unclear at birth which of you were born with the blood to strengthen the seals on Azazel's prison, so the elder raised you both to be the sacrifice, for he knew when the time came the Kings emissary would be able to determine the chosen one.
That night your life would change forever.
Sofia was to be the dragon's sacrifice.
Sofia your kind big sister, your best friend
was going to die.
You weren't going to allow that to happen, somehow you will find away to save her.
even if the world burns in dragon fire to do it.
Characters:
here is some quick character concepts(will replace with proper character sheets laterhopefully)
Luca- (MC)
18 year old,
Luca has always lived a sheltered life away from the realitys of the real world,
all he knows of the world he learned from the books his elders gave him and so he has
a very narrow view of things, Luca often try to bluff his way through things but often
gets in worse trouble than he was trying to get himself out of.
he has a lot of self doubt due to just how little of the world he does know but still he keeps
his head high and always looks forward.
Luca uses magic in battle but if pushed to it can somewhat fight with a sword
Abel
??? years old (looks 21/22)
Abel is a kind and overall friendly guy,
he can seem a bit aloof at times but is always willing to listen to Luca's doubts and worries
keeps his motives for helping Luca a secret, no matter how much Luca bugs him to tell.
he often keeps a smile plastered to his face, though it can come across as fake
he enjoys showing Luca the world, and at times wishes that maybe they could forget
all that troubles them both.
he is loyal and very strong, he uses both a two handed sword and magic in battle,
Sofia
18 years old
Sofia is kind and seems wise beyond her years at times,
always willing to listen to Luca when they where younger as well as
sneaking him snacks and toys.
although she always tries to put on a brave face and smile throught the hard times
Sofia in many ways resents Luca, why does she have to be the one to die?
she hates feeling that way but the thoughts seem to be growing louder each day
Cain
??? years old (looks 19/20 ish)
Cain is Abels younger brother,
he is a hot headed young man who can become agitated easily.
he has a inferiority complex to his brother Abel, who he sees as being perfect.
due to that he has become more hostile to Abel over the years,
Cains talents are in fighting where he can get all his frustrations out,
he also enjoys cooking,he can easily become flustered.
although he'll act like he doesn't care he will always look out for those around him
he enjoys watching Luca interact with the world around them(and with him) thought he'd never admit that
in battle he will only use his weapon or bare hands,
as he is not very gifted in magic and would be more of a danger than those he's fighting
can get possessive.
believes that going on this adventure with Luca will help him, break away from his brother.
Vale
24 years old
Vale is bad at first impressions, with a resting bitch face he often comes across as agressive
and due to that has a hard time making friends or staying on the good side of his employer,
so when Luca seems to look past Vale's unintentional attitude,
he decided that he will do what he can to help Luca
overall Vale is a good man but can easily be taken advantage of due to his friendly nature and his
want to please others, but push him to far and their will be a blood bath
Vale enjoys a good fight, the tougher the opponent the better, thought he wont start a fight with someone
weaker than himself but will fight back if they come at him
he can be distracted easily
originally he was going to be quite different and be the unlockable love interest, but after
working on him for a bit his personality did a complete 360/180(whatever's correct).
i also disliked the idea of making him unlockable due to the fact that it would make his route
seem like the true one
Briana
?? (looks 20 years old)
a mysterious and kind girl, who after learning of the fate that is to fall apon the twins
is all to willing to help.
she introduces Luca to Abel, Cain and Vale.
she has a presences that makes one feel safe.
safe enough that you could share your deepest secrets with no regrets or thought.
[will add the other characters once i have finished their quick concepts
will also add small bio's later]
Goal's:
my goal for NaNoRenO 2016 is to
and plan out the other 3
choose your man to begin the journey,
Progress:
Writing: background completed, plot points started, character info started
Art: Character Concept started, logo design started, sprites begun
Created one of Abel's sprites, Finished Sofia's Sprite(she's not that tall),Finished Luca's sprite(will add a few more emotions later)
here are some of the different expressions
Plan:
Week 1: have full scripts plot points,
begin writing script.
all character concepts done
begin sprites
Week 2: continue writing
finish sprites
begin background(dreading this)
find creative commons music
begin CG's
pull out hair in frustration
Week 3: Finish writing(hopefully)
finish background images
Finish CG's
begin programming(is this the correct term??)
cry over computer
Week 4: stop crying
finish anything that is not done
if all done plot point second route.
cry some more
Ramble time:
well since this is my first time making a visual novel i decided to set my goals, quite low as i initially was not planning to do this story until a much later date.
i was originally going to create a quick smut filled visual novel with two routes, it was more of a reason to draw porn than anything else but after some real thinking i couldn't come up with a short and simple plot for it so i turned back to the idea that i have had put away for a later date due to the amount of work it would be, but the more i thought about it the more the characters began to speak to me and so here i am starting this large project.
i only say large project due to the fact that i had initially planned for you to be able to play as either sibling, each with the own unique love interest and then a shared love interest, but it seemed a bit too much for a first time project so in the meantime i am going to focus only on Luca's routes, if all goes well and people are interested i might split the sister's story into her own game(and own love interests), we will have to wait and see though
question time
How do you feel about the premise of this story?
Who do you like from the characters so far?
What is something you would like to see in this type of story?
What do you not want to see?
do you prefer a lots of choice over a story with less choices?
would you prefer a story with no sexy time or with?
thank you for reading
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