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Hi! We are a group making a Visual Novel in post-apocalyptic setting. We had some trouble coming up with a proper title for it and finally decieded to call it "Fragments: Downfall Unseen". We would appriciate if you tell us if it sounds good or not) The title reflects the fact that heroes of the novel have not seen the catastrophe itself, and they try to collect all the fragments of the story to understand what had happened.
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I like the title! c: They're definitely tough to come up with.
For me personally, I've always considered colons to mean that the work is part of a series (e.g. "Fragments: Downfall Unseen," followed by "Fragments: Uncertain Peace," or something like that). However, I've met a LOT of people who don't think of colons that way, so that should be fine. ^_^
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The title fits what you've said about the story. I hope you have fun making your visual novel.
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