The Bliss Stage VN Music Remix Contest!

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The Bliss Stage VN Music Remix Contest!

#1 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

So. I was musing on how to find a composer for Transformation Sequence, at about the same time that I was revving up to start work on Bliss Stage : Visual Stage, when it hit me - I already have a fair idea of what music I want in BS:VS; (and that link should work now,) but I wanted instrumental versions of most of the songs.

Why not hold a contest? And give as the grand prize the commision to compose most of the music in Transformation Sequence? Meaning monies. Lots of monies. $25 per composition here (negotiable).

Second prize winner will receive a free commercial edition of Transformation Sequence and a song from TS to do.

Everyone will receive my graditude and referals for life, and first pick of any songs that the grand-prize winner can't/won't do. :lol: BS:VS is a free fanproject, for copyright reasons as much as anything else, so I can't really afford to pay anyone.

While we're at it, the disclaimer: The intended music for BS:VN is used without permission from thier respective copyright holders for a free, non-commercial project. The respective creators hold all copy-rights, and will be credited as doing so. No challenge is meant to the copyright status of the current holders of the copyright.

Oh, and the opening theme is Rebellion (Lies) - The Arcade Fire. Unremixed. This is why:
Sleeping is giving in, no matter what the time is. Sleeping is giving in, so lift those heavy eyelids!

People say, that your dreams, are the only things that save ya. Come on baby, in our dreams - we can live on misbehavior!

Every time you close your eyes ~Lies, lies!~ Every time you close your eyes ~Lies, lies!~ Every time you close your eyes ~Lies, lies!~ Every time you close your eyes ~Lies, lies!~

Every time you close your eyes... Every time you close your eyes... Every time you close your eyes... Every time you close your eyes!
Now on with the show!

==Rules==

Below are listed all of the songs I want an instrumental re-mix of. You can pick and submit 2 as .mp3 or .midi attachments. You get a first draft, a second draft, and a final draft, if you want them.

I will be the judge, and I will score it on inventive and appropriate choice of instruments and how good/appropriate it sounds.

I will include brief synopses of the character concepts / situations in which the song will be used, which will be your guide. I will publically answer questions and make clarifications in the thread, if needed.

I will also include my suggestions, which you can ignore, inform your choices, or yoink outright as needed.

The songs: Next post.
Last edited by Tsundere Lightning on Wed Sep 17, 2008 7:47 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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The Music

#2 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

All of these songs can be found @ [http://www.playlist.com/user/35521250/view]My Project Playlist account under the name of Bliss Authority,[/url] which should be working again.

Image song for the main character, Josh Preston: Winterborn (This Sacrifice) - The Cruxshadows.
Lyrics that caught my eye: Cast out regret, that in this debt, a better world is made - that children of a new tomorrow may remember, and avoid our fate. ~Prepare for battle!~
Why: Joshua is commited to the war effort, and scarred less by his mother Blissing Out than by his surviving father and Commander, Jim Preston, being so cold and distant to him. He up to the beginning of the game bit his tongue about it, though - because no cost is too great if it means that no one else has to go through what he did. Also, it sounds BADASS.
Suggestions: A techno or metal remix for battle scenes, as well as a sadder, more hymnal version for Interludes.

Image song for the innocent moe love interest, Sara Smith: Simple And Clean - Kingdom Hearts OST.
Lyrics that caught my eye: Hold me! Whatever happens past this morning, is a little later on! Regardless, of warnings, the future doesn't scare me at all! Nothing's like before!
Why: To the supremely innocent Sara, being a Pilot is the equivalent of being a magical girl / Sailor Moon type - frightening monsters, desperate battle, ultimate fear; but she is also literally pushing back the nightmare with the power of love. She may be frightened, but but she "knows" with all the conviction of a first lover that, if she falls far enough in love with someone who deserves and returns it, that the resistance WILL win.
Suggestions: Slow piano or violin.

Image song for your romantic and professional rival, Keenan Caine: Karma Chameleon - Culture Club.
Lyrics that caught my eye: I'm a man without conviction, I'm a man who doesn't know, how to sell a contradiction. You come and go, you come and go... Karma-karma-karma-karma chameleon! You come and go, you come and go... Loving would be easy if your colors were like my dream; red, gold and green - red, gold and green...
Why: First off, because the Keenan in original creator Ben Lehman's head is a tall, handsome black dude, and since I'm respecting his wishes in my character designs I may as well have Southern stylin's in his image song. :lol:
More to the point, this is a man who isn't sure if he's capable of feeling love - while he thinks that practically every female in the resistance is made of pure hot, and has tried to sleep with all of them (and is working on Sara), he cannot bring himself to trust any of them with his fears, ESPECIALLY post-Anna Lin. Which is yet ANOTHER fear of his, of course.
Suggestions: Jazz, blues, or zydeco remix. Edited to add: ...or calypso, for that matter.

Image song for certified Tsundere and veteran pilot Anna Lin: Death - White Lies
Lyrics that caught my eye: ...So frightened of dying... Relax? Yes, I'm trying... But this fear's got a hold on me... Yes, this fear's got a hold on me...
Why: Anna is the (at 17) oldest, most traumatized pilot, who has one foot on the real world and one in the Bliss, and knows it. She already has a 2-year old toddler, Archer Lin, and refuses to discuss HOW she got pregnant: she finally broke up with Keenan for his indescretions, painfully... and she is desperately, desperately afraid - less that she'll die or Bliss, more that she will die or Bliss and no one will be there to take care of Archer or win the war.
Suggestions: Slower and on bamboo flute. Both for the mournful qualities of that instrument and for a touch of Asian influence in a song about someone who refers to the enemy as "ALIEN SONS OF CHOBAIOXI!" with all the force her lungs can muster. :mrgreen:

More tomorrow. Crossposting to the BS:VS page.
Last edited by Tsundere Lightning on Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:24 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Bliss Stage: Love is your weapon! A sci-fi visual novel about child soldiers coming of age. Kickstarter prerelease here. WIP thread here. Original tabletop game by Ben Lehman here. Tumblr here.

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Anchors and Other Characters

#3 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

Sorry about the delay: the computer lab was locked yesterday, pending an investigation into Shenanigans perpetrated against me. It'll be resolved by the time it matters.

These shenanegans also involve someone deleting my Project Playlist account, which I've put up again. Couldn't find Meredith's image song, unfortunately.

Being brief with other themes, in the form of "Chara/Sitch: Song Name (Artist): Snippet of lyrics (reason why appropriate)- Remix suggestions?"
  • Image for your (Josh Preston's) father, the Commander and general tweeker bastard Jim Preston: Time Is Running Out (Muse).

    "I think I'm drowning... Asphixiated... I want to break the spell that you've created... you're something beautiful; a contradiction... I want to play the game, I want the friction! You... will be... the death... of me! You... will be... the death... of me!"


    Forget the fact that be beats the Bliss with the methamphetamines he impounded as a TIJCC security guard. He has a rather... disturbing relationship with another Resistance member: that it's
    everyone's favorite Broken Bird, veteran pilot Anna Lin
    is left as an exercise for the reader. One who is A) a teenager and therefore B) at least 50 years younger than him. :shock: ...saying he's a bastard is almost redundant, but he isn't too fond of his only surviving kid either. Though he's not counting on him having slightly more spine than a certian Ikari-san...

    Screamo or at least x1.5 faster techno?
  • Your Anchor and first love/first kiss Meredith Baker: How Naked Are We Going To Get? (The Blow)

    "When they ask you how you want it, will your clear heart bear down upon it? Will they notice the scars that run up your side? Will they care about the wars that you fought in the night?
    Will there be room in their bed for how terribly white you become, when you finally arrive?"


    She loves you. She is your Anchor to the world from your dream. SHE notices "the scars that run up your side." And it worries her. And it worries her that you seem to be drifting away - into the dream, and into the arms of others.
    ...And she's getting incredibly frustrated that, at this point in your relationship, that you have yet to rip off her clothes and love her 'till she screams. How naked are you going to get, indeed?

    Jazz? Blues?
  • Derek Smith, Sara's brother and Anchor and the base mechanic: Falling Away With You (Muse).

    "I can't remember when it was good... moments of happiness elude. Maybe I just misunderstood? All of the love we left behind, watching the flashbacks intertwine. Memories I will never find..."

    Derek is bad at being an Anchor. No: Correction: Derek is VERY bad at being an Anchor, mostly due to being overprotective and Abort at the first sign of trouble. He is a very good mechanic. He was very good at protecting Sara from the roving gangs that infest San Francisco in 2016. He built the ANIMa, for Christ's sake. Why, why can he not protect Sara in the dream as well as he can in the world?

    Cello or Piano? Especially if Sara gets violin or viola.
  • Yukiko Tendou, Keenan's Anchor: Lay All Your Love On Me (Abba).

    "I wasn't jealous before we met. ...Now every woman I see is a potential threat... And I'm possessive; it isn't nice; you've heard me saying that smoking was my only vice. But now it isn't true... Now everything is new... And all I've learned, has overturned; I beg of you... Don't go wasting your emotion! Lay all your love on me!"

    Her anchor is KEENAN, for God's sake. KEENAN CAINE. Who, at first blush, looks and acts like he wrote Mambo #5 (while he privately identifies more with Karma Chameleon)! It's enough to drive any Anchor - defined here as "Someone who is in love with you as part of thier job" - up the wall, even one as patient and Comforting as Yukiko tends to be.
    Worse, Yukiko is pregnant. Since she hasn't slept with anyone BUT Keenan, this means that K-kun is the father. And if he hasn't immediatley jumped to the same conclusion... then does that mean he suspects her of cheating herself?

    Revolutionary Girl Utena-style or Techno?
  • Laura Porter, ex-gang member with Anna's Chinatown Flinthearts and Anna's good right hand: Hysteria (Muse).

    "It's holding me, morphing me... And forcing me to stri~ive... To be endlessly, cold within, and dreaming I'm alive... Cause I want it NOW! I want it NOW! Give me your heart and your soul! And i'm breaking down! I'm breaking out! Last chance to lose control..."
Laura's only family was the Chinatown Flinthearts: she didn't much miss her adoptors when they Blissed. ...Yes, she's Chinese. ("Huh. Then why don't you go by your Chinese name if you're so proud of it?" "...cuz the fuckers that ordered me direct from China on the net didn't bother to consult a Mandarin-to-English dictionary when they named me!!") They were friends, family, occasional lovers, comrades in arms. Then the aliens landed, and what was left of the Flinthearts, her and Anna excepted, wouldn't fit in a thimble. Anna braved the swaying, creaking Golden Gate, with Laura watching her six: and the rest was history. Laura, at the moment, is just preoccupied with forgetting the second wave of the invasion (the Bliss was the first) in any way she can do it. Or in any person with whom she could do it, for that matter. ...No, she is not an unlockable love interest, though I may write in Josh having a brief fling with her.

Koto? Classic rock? Metal?
Last edited by Tsundere Lightning on Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:26 pm, edited 2 times in total.
She's sun and rain: She's fire and ice. A little crazy, but it's nice.
Bliss Stage: Love is your weapon! A sci-fi visual novel about child soldiers coming of age. Kickstarter prerelease here. WIP thread here. Original tabletop game by Ben Lehman here. Tumblr here.

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Interlude and Battle Music

#4 Post by Tsundere Lightning »

General Interlude theme: Tunnels / Neighborhood #1 (Arcade Fire).

"Then we tried to name our babies... But we forgot all the names that (the names that) we used to know. But sometimes, we remember our bedrooms - and our parent's bedrooms - and the bedrooms of our friends! Then we think of our parents... well, what ever happened to them?"

A hymn to a world without adults; and a love song to the surviving children.

Naturalistic? Progressive rock? Seaside white noise for Treasure Island?

Battle Music:

First Mission: Hemisphere (RahXephon OST).
Sore demo, ittai kono boku ni? Nani ga dekiru tte iun da? Kyuukutsu na... Hakoniwa no genjitsu o... Kaeru tame ni... nani ga dekiru no? Jinsei no - hanbun mo! Boku wa mada ikitenai... Sakaratte - dakiatte! Muishiki ni kizamarete yuku, keiken no tatuu!

(Trans: Even with this, what can you expect from me? How can we possibly break through to the real? Escaping this world, this pocket reality... and finding out what the truth really is... I haven't even lived my life! Alternating between love and rebellion - the things I've seen, the things I'll do, tattoed permanently, into my memories!)


An easy tutotial mission... and it may as well be Josh singing the song. ...well, or Anna Lin. Even with the ANIMa, what can you expect of Josh? :lol: I'll try to plan it so that it hits the desperate military anthem part at the MOMENT that Sara's mission goes wrong and you have to save her. :mrgreen:

Techno? Prog rock? Electric guitar?

...no other ideas for mission music at this point (nor is anything else needed for the test build of the first mission or two,) so I'm beginning this contest RIGHT NOW.
She's sun and rain: She's fire and ice. A little crazy, but it's nice.
Bliss Stage: Love is your weapon! A sci-fi visual novel about child soldiers coming of age. Kickstarter prerelease here. WIP thread here. Original tabletop game by Ben Lehman here. Tumblr here.

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