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by Crazy Cactus » Tue Oct 25, 2016 7:39 pm
Does the story interest you? Why or why not?
--As others have already said, the VR element to the story is definitely the biggest "draw" for this visual novel, and I'm curious to see how far you will go in the story based on this initial premise.
Which part(s) of the story description entices you the most?
--I can sense some hints of some philosophical type notions about life, reality, and the meaning of true existence, which is very good to see some serious thinking in a visual novel. It will definitely leave room for some interesting things that will make us (hopefully) question ourselves and to ask whats truly "real" and what isn't. That's my theory anyway.
Is the character art appealing to you? Why or why not?
--Character art is on the simpler side, but effective. Characters emote moreso than usual, and that essentially gives them more depth and energy.
How do you feel about the character descriptions? Did they make you interested to know more about the characters? Why or why not?
--Character descriptions overall are nice and to the point, but to be perfectly honest, I'm mostly being 'roped in' by Lilya. I like that she's a badass in the digital realm of the online universe, and that makes me feel like she's a bit of a social outcast in reality, which is nice for the story to develop from there. Plus, it helps that she has one of my favorite hairstyles for ladies (the high angle cut - long in front, short in back).
What do you think of the background art?
--Background art I would describe as dream-like, trippy, and clean.
The game focuses on story/character development (there is only light, optional romance) - is that a downside for you?
--Nope. If story is compelling enough, I back a visual novel. My Kickstarter profile is a testament to this belief.
What kind of rewards would you wish for in a < /reality > crowdfunding campaign?
--I always want to see a reward with the OST. Its one of my favorite things to pledge a little more toward a campaign to get, and one of the reasons I have a pledge level with the soundtrack just above the game only pledge.
Are you interested in playing the free demo?
--Seeing as how you just recently uploaded the demo, I don't see why not. XD
Any other comments, observations or critique? We want to hear it all!
--All I would say is this: keep up the good work! I like the vision for this particular endeavor, and will be watching this fellow visual novel's development closely.
It's kind of a cross between my natural art style (western/concept art-ish), and anime style (which I love).
We hope to get lots of feedback on the demo, so we can continue working towards an awesome final game. So please give it a try and then fill out our demo 
Woah, the demo is out already! I probably won't have time to play it anytime soon (sigh), but I will definitely get back to you guys when I do!
