"Expected Statement. Else ->:"?

[That Oyajicon]

I'm working on a simple game to teach myself the basics of Ren'Py, and I decided to learn stat management by doing a short quiz, and giving a different response based on how well the player scored.

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 "Alright, the quiz is done, now it's time to see how you did."
    
    if QP == 5:
        "Holy smokes, you got 'em all right! Good for you!"
    else:
        if QP == 4:
            "Hmm, looks like you missed just one, that's not too bad."
        else: 
            if QP == 3:
                "Well, three out of five isn't AWUL, ya know..."
            else:
                if QP => 1: 
                    "Seriously? You got less than half of these right?"
                    else:
                        "You...got zero right? How????"
    "Well, anyway, now that we're all done with that, let's experiment a bit more..."
    

I'm getting an error when I try to run the code. Specifically, Ren'Py's telling me that the last three lines are where the problem lies. Anyone here who could point me in the right direction?

[Imperf3kt]

Your problem is indentation and your incorrect use of conditionals. You don't actually require an else for this.
=> 1 is the wrong way around also. Additionally I fixed a typo (AWUL > awful, with italics)
Try this instead:

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"Alright, the quiz is done, now it's time to see how you did."
    
    if QP == 5:
        "Holy smokes, you got 'em all right! Good for you!"
    elif QP == 4:
        "Hmm, looks like you missed just one, that's not too bad."
    elif QP == 3:
        "Well, three out of five isn't {i}awful{/i}, ya know..."
    elif QP >= 1: 
        "Seriously? You got less than half of these right?"
    else:
        "You... got zero right? How????"

    "Well, anyway, now that we're all done with that, let's experiment a bit more..."

[That Oyajicon]

Oh, thanks a ton! The tutorial videos I'd been following didn't mention using elif, so that really helps me out.

[Imperf3kt]

As a suggestion, check the upload date on tutorials in future. Try to avoid anything from before around November last year.
Oh, and there may still be an indentation issue. I forgot to remove the indentation on the conditionals, you'd probably want them at the same level as the first line of dialogue.

[That Oyajicon]

Yeah, that's pretty much what I've experienced. It's gotten to the point where even simple stuff like this:

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    show p1 at right
    jp "Puff?"
    show p1:
        at xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5
    jp "Puff?"
    jp "Puff, puff?"
    "Hmm..."

Is throwing up errors, and it's a little frustrating trying to figure out why. (For the record, it's the xalign/yalign bit that's apparently missing something at the end of the line, but I'm not sure how to figure out what's missing.)

[Divona]

You don't need "at" for ATL, unless it's transform.

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    show p1 at right
    jp "Puff?"
    show p1:
        xalign 0.5 yalign 0.5
    jp "Puff?"
    jp "Puff, puff?"
    "Hmm..."

[That Oyajicon]

Okay, thanks!