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Would like to get feedback on our VN art.
Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2017 2:16 pm
by shiza
Hey guys,
My artist friend and I are making a game based off of Kim Possible.
we just finished 2 sprites and a background and are looking for feedback.
http://i.imgur.com/Rm3mvut.png
Re: Would like to get feedback on our VN art.
Posted: Sat Jul 01, 2017 10:00 pm
by Dramatological
I like the background. The faces are nice. The nipple thing is a bit distracting, but I'm guessing I'm not the target demographic.
Re: Would like to get feedback on our VN art.
Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2017 1:29 am
by PencilSlothCreations
Would it be alright if I give some detailed constructive criticism? Or would you also like some redlining done? I just don't want to come off as too harsh~
Re: Would like to get feedback on our VN art.
Posted: Sun Jul 02, 2017 4:10 am
by shiza
PencilSlothCreations wrote:Would it be alright if I give some detailed constructive criticism? Or would you also like some redlining done? I just don't want to come off as too harsh~
By all means go right ahead.
Re: Would like to get feedback on our VN art.
Posted: Mon Jul 31, 2017 5:44 pm
by Ben Ayoo
Kim Possible is supposed to be girl? The broad shoulders make her look manly. Strong nipple presence on a man's body looks not good.
I like the other girl face and in general she looks like the best part of the whole picture. Her design looks stable. She has an actual neck that supports her head size unlike Kim's. Her wrist looks okay while Kim's looks like it has being crushed.
For the background, it looks like you copy pasted the thick tree all over. Try to add variety like some thin trunk trees.
Also it would mprove the background if the aduience could see just a hint of the the things written in the bulletin board.
Re: Would like to get feedback on our VN art.
Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2017 2:01 am
by Taleweaver
Personal art threads go into the Personal Art subforum.
Moved.
