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After years of missed opportunities, I'm finally participating in NaNoRenO. My entry will be a short VN titled Layover Lovers.


For this entry, I chose a simple concept to work on as this will be a solo project. Sadly, I don't have any art to show right away, but I will try to update this thread as I make the assets. I plan on documenting the development process and will be live streaming some of it. For anyone who wants to follow along, join the Discord server!

This is a cool idea, I like big visual novels with lots of characters just as much as the next person but it's also a lot of fun to read a smaller-scale, more intimate story about just two people. Good luck on your NaNo!

This is such a cute idea! You put the kind of story I've always wanted to read into words c: Excited to see this at the end of NaNo. Will this be a kinetic or visual novel?

Thanks, guys!

@pumpkin spike, there is only one ending, but how it plays out will be different depending on how close they become. That's the plan, at least. So I guess it is still considered a kinetic novel.

This was a cute game. I liked that it had an open sort of ending instead of a rushed, whirlwind romance, and the characters stumbling to get to know each other felt a little bit awkward in a very real kind of way, which I liked.

I wish that there would have been more variation when playing as one character or the other. During the dialogue sections, it felt like I very rarely got to see what the character I was playing as actually thought of the other, so on my second playthrough I ended up skipping a lot of the dialogue since I wasn't really interested in rereading the same story.

Overall, though, it was a cute story. And I liked the airport-themed GUI, especially the character name/gender screen being a boarding pass, that was super cute.