Nyan Hunt [NaNo2019][Comedy][Short]

[ndistrict]

Here's another solo work! Someone laughed, so I add a comedy tag.

Plot of the story ... if it matters:
The royal highness has ordered the captain to sail towards the uncharted to find a rare national treasure which is an unknown character with cat ears and tail. They provided all the information and resources he can get only to realize what he learned can be tossed into the ocean.

Features:
Layered Parallax ----- ing.
Nameable MC.
Have three endings. Hoping the choices are self-explanatory.
Now with ambience! Properly credited in end credit scene even if it's CC0.

Download Link:
https://namelessdistrict.itch.io/nyan-hunt
Preview images are also in there.

[andalusian]

i liked the premise!

most lines have many grammar errors in them. this is not just distracting - it is difficult to guess what was meant to be said. i understood perhaps only a half of all lines, so i started fast-forwarding, so i missed much of the story

the accent of the Quartermaster also makes it harder to understand. if your English is not very good, it is better not to depict accent in spelling - use simpler words and simpler sentences, then it will still be easy to understand.

[ndistrict]

Got it!

I'll get it fixed for the next update. Thank you for reading either way!