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Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2011 11:21 am
by ElviraNyx
That was Beautiful!
Not to Mention, I cried like a Child.
Great Job!
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2011 1:51 am
by DragoonHP
A lovely story... and I particularly liked the interface of the game and how you used images in it...
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:10 am
by Erisau
That was a beautiful story and, like many before me, I cried.
You are very good at what you do, though it was a bit overbearing with how sweet it was. Although I kind of think it was better for it.
I don't really understand the end of Lawrence's storyline
Did he die too?
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 8:59 am
by D'd'D
The story's so beautiful.
If only every married couple are like that.
^Impossible?
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2011 11:00 pm
by facades
I really love your game! It was the first game that made me cry
The format of the game is really unique. I love how you use the wedding vows as the menu to the various chapters of their lives.
I love how you wrote the story starting from their childhood ( I have a soft spot for childhood friendship stories).
I think this kinetic novel is the most meaningful game I've played so far.
I liked the various lessons I could learn from the game.. lessons related to life, marriage, love, death, etc..
It was just so sweet and beautiful! And the music was nice too. After playing the game, I felt like I was in a trance.
Thanks for making this game!
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:40 pm
by dizzcity
Wow, it's been nearly two years since I came back to this forum. Thank you all for the lovely comments. I really appreciate it.
@ Erisau
Yes, he did... though I only implied it
Now to look around and see what's changed in the last two years...
-Dizzy-
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 8:22 pm
by reikolovesyou
This game was beautiful. :') I still have it on my laptop even though I finished it ages ago ^^
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Fri May 03, 2013 6:37 pm
by Lire
It was a beautiful dream,,
And some memories pricked my eyes and there comes the tears,,
The tears wiped up and she wrote this,,
"Good work, i still like to read it sometimes..
"
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Sat May 11, 2013 5:57 pm
by philip
Just found this; downloaded and played it - very nice, very moving!
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2014 12:05 am
by qirien
As I'm working on a VN about a newly married couple, I thought I'd play yours and see what your take on that idea was.
I loved how you followed the couple all through the years. Too many stories only tell about the falling-in-love part. And, yeah, even though a lot of parts felt a little sugary and expected, your details and the emotion in each scene touched me anyway. I really enjoyed it, thank you!
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2014 12:44 am
by dizzcity
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hope all goes well with your VN too.
Cheers,
-Dizzy-
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2014 3:46 pm
by Caveat Lector
I love this also. One part in particular that really got to me was the "In sickness and in health" part:
Just contrasting the two different scenarios back-to-back--dealing with cancer in their senior years, and a simple fever in childhood. Just that contrast showing the dedication between the two across the years...can't quite describe why, but yeah, it got to me.
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2014 11:20 am
by qirien
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Fri Oct 31, 2014 3:01 am
by dizzcity
Thank you! Glad for the notice.
Cheers,
-Joshua-
Re: Wedding Vows - a Kinetic Short Story Anthology
Posted: Mon May 01, 2017 5:27 am
by martin123