Demon Wraith (Indiegogo campaign) [Action][horror][Supernatural][Windows and Android]

[Gouka]

PLOT:

Gabrielle's day was already bad enough. Her day-off has been cancelled, the city is under siege of a serial killer and the authorities are unable to catch the culprit. However, an earthquake strikes the city and a horde of monsters appear in the city in large numbers. Outnumbered, the monsters overtake the city, turning it into a living hell.

Now, Gabrielle must partner up with the mysterious Vincent and other survivors to discover the cause of the city's downfall and survive long enough to bring help to the city.

But is it already too late?

TWO SIDES OF THE STORY

The game is divided between "Side A" Gabrielle's scenario and "Side B" Vincent's scenario. To reach the true end of the story, you must play the two scenarios. Each character with have unique situations to experience.

DEATH AWAITS YOU!

As you read through the story, you'll be presented with a choice to make. Every choice is a life and death situation for the characters. Each wrong choice will result in a terrible death, so choose wisely.

Expect more than 10 hours of gameplay.





Watch the creation of one of the event CGs of the game:
[youtube]https://youtu.be/AsWKoef6Ng4[/youtube]






https://atelieredge.itch.io/demon-wraith-alpha-demo

CHECK THE FUNDING CAMPAIGN HERE
https://igg.me/at/demowraith/x/4635327

[andalusian]

i will try the demo shortly, but before that: the promotional texts have some grammar and style errors, they could use a read-over from a native English speaker. if i were considering funding the project, it would slightly lower my confidence in it, first impressions are important and all that.

for example:

https://img.itch.zone/aW1nLzE4NzMxOTMuc ... aUTeOm.png "He's [...] reluctant of him" - this is not how "reluctant" is used; although isnt that redundant with "suspicious" anyway? simply "He's highly suspicious of Vincent and who he works for." would be best, i think

https://img.itch.zone/aW1nLzE4NzMxODAuc ... rblOJ9.png "None of you are Safe" - in English, words are not capitalized for emphasis

https://img.itch.zone/aW1nLzE4NzMxOTEuc ... ZpONkR.png "and always ready" should be "and is always ready", because "has" from the beginning of the sentence does not fit as the verb for that part, so the verb would be just missing

[Gouka]

No more replies? This really sucks.

[andalusian]

it seemed very promising

* many typoes
* main character and best friend look too similar
* very good art
* a glitch during the captains speech - multiple talking sprites of him appear on top of each other
*

in the scene where you choose to open the door, the picture with the alien monstrosity is shown immediately and the anxious music starts immediately... they should probably wait until the text reaches the line where the main character sees them

*

it made for an effective demo, but the aliens are shown "at full power" very soon after the game starts... usually in movies like this, the monsters are only gradually revealed, so the player can speculate; it felt rushed

[Gouka]

it seemed very promising

* many typoes
* main character and best friend look too similar
* very good art
* a glitch during the captains speech - multiple talking sprites of him appear on top of each other
*

in the scene where you choose to open the door, the picture with the alien monstrosity is shown immediately and the anxious music starts immediately... they should probably wait until the text reaches the line where the main character sees them

*

it made for an effective demo, but the aliens are shown "at full power" very soon after the game starts... usually in movies like this, the monsters are only gradually revealed, so the player can speculate; it felt rushed

Thanks for the input, but I have a question:
What do you mean that the main character and the best friend look too similar? They have very different designs.

I fixed the bug with the Captain and another one I found.