Wow, didn't expect to get some feedback now but it's great nonetheless! Time to reply then!
sunasrose wrote:1. I am naturally drawn to psychological horrors, and I'm also intrigued by the yandere guys, instead of the usual yandere female.
Yep, you see a lot of Yandere girls or even pure Yandere girls games, but where are the guys? Either they are hidden in bad endings or just one single character. Personally I have an obsession for this type of love interest and wanted more, so why not making more?
sunasrose wrote:Kaede looks like he could be the "I'm sweet and polite, but I secretly kill cats in the forest," type of guy.
Wow, did not expect this description. XD I'm laughing even more about it now!
sunasrose wrote:5: Looks like you've got a good plotline going, and I look forward to playing this once you're finished. My palette of VN's is relatively small, but I enjoy GxB and I'm picky so it's hard for me to find any that really pique my interest. This one seems very unique to anything I've played, especially it being from a female perspective.
Thanks, I will try my best to meet expectations but since it's my first own personal project there is nothing guaranteed. What counts for me is that I try my best.
Letitia_L wrote:3.I'm most interested in Hayato, I feel like he has a mysterious aura around him.
Oh boy, how would the guy react to that statement. XD
Letitia_L wrote:5. I'm really interested in this game! I hope to see something well fleshed out, not rushed and surprising :)
Yes, I plan to develop instead of letting it crash down on MC. Horror and Suspense feel best to me when it's built and not solely based on shock and jumpscares or else it loses the spice in my opinion. Slowly letting the information sink in and growing aware of the danger - of course, with game over endings you can find a rushed end XDD
Akatea wrote:Hi, Akua! It's nice to finally see the proper sprite art for Kaede! I was really looking forward to his final design from when you posted that character design poll on OA.
1. What I initially found to be of interest was the black butterflies and the spider lily. I'm all about hidden foreshadows so I got really excited when I saw how you used the symbolism as a foreshadow of what's to come in the game. But of course, it's the psychological horror genre that appeals to me rather than romancing crazies.
Hello~! Yea, I don't post on OA because... yea... the game has reasons XD And yay, somebody noticed the symbols! I like to play with symbols and interpretation a lot since it forces people to think twice what the meaning of said object is for example.
Akatea wrote:When the good end feels like everything just magically gets solved and the crazies are no longer crazy, it becomes anti-climatic.
Yes, personally I don't get the "power of love heals obsession", 1. It's not very realistic and 2. The guy loses character, what made him unique or stand out suddenly vanishes.
Akatea wrote:3. I find them all to be interesting, but the one that stuck out the most to me was Kaede. It doesn't help that he's the first LI introduced (canon LI?)--it gives the impression that he's the most yandere out of the three? I like his femininity.
Finally some love for Kaede XD
Akatea wrote:4. Most Likely - Aoi
Aoi seems the most unhinged to me, and therefore most likely to snap. He's young and hormonal, and unsure of his future (doesn't have a goal or plan). His lack of care is a concern to me--he seems like the type to easily get bored and discard playthings. I don't know how attached he is to Marika. Time is always a factor for developing affection (in a "normal" relationship) but it can't really be applied to yanderes, which makes it hard to judge based on how long they've been step-siblings. I also noticed that it was mentioned he seemed like a clingy brother from the outside. This makes me wonder if he sticks to her side a lot (when he's not in school). He reminds me of Remu from BAD MEDICINE.
Hayato
For the most part, Hayato seems like a fairly normal LI that can be put in an otome game. That was my impression. The only things that gave red flags were "has the feeling she saw him before but cannot remember when or if she really did", "easily...angered", and "do you think this is the real me?" He has normal hobbies, normal likes, heck he looks like a normal kuudere LI. What made me put him above Kaede, though. was the fact that he has a temperament and physique (183cm?!) easily capable of causing harming. And he sounds like a stalker. He might be two-faced? Hmm, the more I look at him the more he's starting to look like an abusive a**hole.
Least Likely (but equally dangerous) - Kaede
Frail, feminine, and best friend! How can he possibly kill Marika? Pfft, I mean as long "killing" doesn't mean "killing the person with your own hands" I'm sure it's still possible for Kaede to do it. But honestly, why would he? Holding her captive seems more plausible but since I don't know what the storyline is, I can't completely rule out Kaede killing Marika. It just doesn't make sense since he depends on her so much. Unless he's trying to commit double (lovers) suicide. He seems like the manipulative type. Probably would say "Don't leave! Please... I can't live without you" and guilt trip her so that she wouldn't leave. That kind of thing that leads to the MC staying with the yandere foreveeeer. Yikes.
Yandere Type Summary
Kaede - Clingy/Dependence/Double Suicide
Hayato - Stalker/Domestic Violence
Aoi - Obsessive/Monopoly
I'm really impressed, I can see, that you are no beginner to this! Now waiting how much of your predictions are true XDD
Akatea wrote:Oh and if smut was added, I wonder if any of it would be consensual.
I carefully avoid rape even if it's somewhat typical happening in extreme Yandere stories. If MC says no and means it, it will be a no. And smut is really only added if it gets popular and even then I consider whether to implement it into the story or as epilogue.