Indentation Errors and more errors; what should I do? Solved

[ksotaku100]

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I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.


On line 3 of F:\Documents\P\SDKs\Ren' Py 6.9.3 SDK\renpy-6.9.3\The Drug Addict/game/natsumi1.rpy: say statement does not expect a block. Please check the indentation of the line after this one.
k "I would like to hang out with you, Natsumi."
                                               ^

On line 313 of F:\Documents\P\SDKs\Ren' Py 6.9.3 SDK\renpy-6.9.3\The Drug Addict/game/script.rpy: expected statement.
n and s "Yay!!"
  ^

On line 318 of F:\Documents\P\SDKs\Ren' Py 6.9.3 SDK\renpy-6.9.3\The Drug Addict/game/script.rpy: choice menuitem expects a non-empty block.
"Shizune":
          ^

On line 3 of F:\Documents\P\SDKs\Ren' Py 6.9.3 SDK\renpy-6.9.3\The Drug Addict/game/shizune2.rpy: say statement does not expect a block. Please check the indentation of the line after this one.
k "I need to leave."
                    ^

Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 6.9.3c/code]
[code]label natsumi1:
    
    k "I would like to hang out with you, Natsumi."
            
             n "Oh, that's great! See ya, Shizune."
            
             show shizune angry with dissolve
            
             s "What?!"
            
             n "Heh... too bad!"/code]
[code]    n and s "Yay!!"
    
    s "Okay, who are you going to hang out with?"
    
    menu:
     "Shizune":
     jump shizune1
      
     "Natsumi":
     jump natsumi1
           /code]
[code]label shizune2:
    
             k "I need to leave."
                 
              n "Going to Shizune, huh?"
                 
              k "Uh... no."
                 
              stop movie
              hide movie
                 
              scene bg altroom with fade
                 
              show kimono angry with dissolve/code]

Can someone check these lines. I keep getting errors. Thank you.

[ksotaku100]

Also I'm separating the storylines into different .rpy files.

[A Terrible Rabbit]

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label natsumi1:

k "I would like to hang out with you, Natsumi."

n "Oh, that's great! See ya, Shizune."

show shizune angry with dissolve

s "What?!"

n "Heh... too bad!"
n and s "Yay!!"

s "Okay, who are you going to hang out with?"

menu:
"Shizune":
jump shizune1

"Natsumi":
jump natsumi1
label shizune2:

k "I need to leave."

n "Going to Shizune, huh?"

k "Uh... no."

stop movie
hide movie

scene bg altroom with fade

show kimono angry with dissolve

Sorry, did it look like this? I can't totally tell with your formatting.

[ksotaku100]

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label natsumi1:

k "I would like to hang out with you, Natsumi."

n "Oh, that's great! See ya, Shizune."

show shizune angry with dissolve

s "What?!"

n "Heh... too bad!"
n and s "Yay!!"

s "Okay, who are you going to hang out with?"

menu:
"Shizune":
jump shizune1

"Natsumi":
jump natsumi1
label shizune2:

k "I need to leave."

n "Going to Shizune, huh?"

k "Uh... no."

stop movie
hide movie

scene bg altroom with fade

show kimono angry with dissolve

Sorry, did it look like this? I can't totally tell with your formatting.

Sorry, dude. I was a little confused with how you use

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 and [code/]

anyway, I'll attach the.rpy scripts into this message.

Please check and answer. Thank You.

[ksotaku100]

Hopefully, people aren't laughing at my script, It's a school project. I'm a little bad at indentations. If you haven't checked my profile, I'm 14. I've downloaded KS and it was enjoyable.

[A Terrible Rabbit]

Ok, here you are.
This should straighten out the line 318 error v
menus should look like this:

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menu:
    "Shizune":
        jump shizune1
    "Natsumi":
        jump natsumi1

Also. . . you seem to have indented everything 4 spaces to the left.
In natsumi1.rpy, the issue is that continued indentation. When you write a line, and have the next line below it indented in four times, it becomes a block. Hence, the 'Renpy does not expect a block on line 3' error. This is the same error on line three of shizune1.rpy Push everything back to the left margin to keep things straight.

The error for line 313 is that Renpy understands 'and' to mean something different. You can't use 'and' to have two characters talking simultaneously, you have to define a new character named Natsumi & Shizune to show them talking together.


Hope that helps with it, and good luck!

[ksotaku100]

Ok, here you are.
This should straighten out the line 318 error v
menus should look like this:

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menu:
    "Shizune":
        jump shizune1
    "Natsumi":
        jump natsumi1

Also. . . you seem to have indented everything 4 spaces to the left.
In natsumi1.rpy, the issue is that continued indentation. When you write a line, and have the next line below it indented in four times, it becomes a block. Hence, the 'Renpy does not expect a block on line 3' error. This is the same error on line three of shizune1.rpy Push everything back to the left margin to keep things straight.

The error for line 313 is that Renpy understands 'and' to mean something different. You can't use 'and' to have two characters talking simultaneously, you have to define a new character named Natsumi & Shizune to show them talking together.


Hope that helps with it, and good luck!

Yep. It did. Thanks.

[pkt]

Since python is what renpy is based on it makes a fuss about indentation on lines a lot.
Too many or too few spaces and you get those problems...
Try selecting a bunch of lines and using Tab or Shift+Tab...

Another one was fixed by using

"Natsumi and Shizune" "Yay!"

instead of

n and s "Yay!"

Keep in mind that the traceback has lot of useful info to help point these things out.
Here's the fixed versions anyhow. Hope you learned a bit.