Page 3 of 6

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:13 am
by MaiMai
I'm glad you're looking forward to it Yunome! And the adult version is only halfway done which is why there isn't much of a nose yet. Don't worry, it'll be there!

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:46 am
by winternight119
Yes! Don't hate on your hand at humor. I laughed when I read the Twilight reference. XD

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 4:53 am
by LVUER
Hahaha. Me too ^_^ And I find it funny even more since some people in certain forum actually trash talking Twilight and confused why so many people enjoy Twilight...

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 6:31 pm
by MaiMai
Annnnd Adult!Amelia is done! So both Teen and Adult versions are done, Briar is next :)

Image

@winternight & LVUER-- I've read the first book and a bit of the second... That's how far I was willing to go so it's pretty hard not to make fun of it at this point.

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:00 pm
by Starling
*stares* You're hair coloring is so happyshinywee (in other words good). She looks like Quistis! XD I've been brimming with saying that for a while.

I'm excited to see the other sprites.

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 7:45 pm
by Aleema
^___^ Her hair looks orange (which is "redhead"), and luv luv luv orange. <3
I can't wait to see Briar!

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:55 pm
by Yunome
Starling wrote:*stares* You're hair coloring is so happyshinywee (in other words good). She looks like Quistis! XD I've been brimming with saying that for a while.
Gasp! She does! I couldn't put my finger on who she reminded my of for the longest time =] Yayy a nose! And I love the way to did the hair, so soft and silky looking. Can't wait for Brair!

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 9:59 pm
by sheetcakeghost
That's very true. If I were even remotely competent as an editor (I read past typos like I'm bilingual) I'd offer my services. Something did occur to me though from the snipit. If the kid doesn't want the teacher's attention he may not use a full sentence like that. A sharp shushing could convey the same message.

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:03 pm
by MaiMai
And heeerreeee's Briar! Man, I draw quickly, but that's both a good and bad thing. I like how the colors turned out mostly and his eyes o3o

Image

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:08 am
by jadacamilla
MaiMai wrote:Yeah, might tweak Adam's design a bit, he looks a bit too much like a guy from an 18+ otome game O.O;;
I knew it! I though i saw him somewhere in an otome game before....too bad, i can't snuggle in the tip of my tongue what the name of that otoge is....

And briar is like a girl which is not a bad thing. it's nice *thumbs up*

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:17 am
by azureXtwilight
I like his style!
Somewhat not too fancy and humble!

And green hair is also a plus!

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 12:41 am
by MaiMai
jadacamilla wrote:
MaiMai wrote:Yeah, might tweak Adam's design a bit, he looks a bit too much like a guy from an 18+ otome game O.O;;
I knew it! I though i saw him somewhere in an otome game before....too bad, i can't snuggle in the tip of my tongue what the name of that otoge is....

And briar is like a girl which is not a bad thing. it's nice *thumbs up*
Adam looks quite like Kageyama a guy from the 18+ otome game Brothers ~Koisuru Oniisama~. I found out about this game from a blog and it's.... Well. Yes, it is a game where you pursue your stepbrothers. Oh u Japan.

I'm glad you and azure like Briar's design, he is supposed to look feminine compared to Adam and Micheal. Speaking of which, Adam is being worked on next, and I have more time now that I'm out of school!

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 10:41 pm
by MaiMai
Something I made for fun before I go back to work on Adam (he's tougher to draw than Briar)

Instead of having a cynical male protagonist, I have a cynical female protagonist. GENIUS. :shock: Er, in all seriousness, this was made for fun facts and a little insight to teen!Amelia's thought process.

Another Fun Fact-- This may or may not be obvious, but Amelia's last name comes from one of my favorite authors, John Steinbeck. Yes, she likes his books a lot too :)

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:08 pm
by azureXtwilight
About the looks 16...

I think she looks older than that :)

Re: Magic Memoir WIP (I don't even KNOW)

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:16 pm
by MaiMai
It's the glasses isn't it ;_; That and she dresses like a librarian